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Waffles

PostPosted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 7:01 pm


This story is my version of the Seventh book. J.K Rowling's will probably be much better. Take that back, it WILL be better. Anyways...

Warnings are: Shonen-Ai/Yaoi/Slash or whatever you choose to call it. *HarryDraco*, and some more adult language. :3

I have up to mid Chapter 29 planned out, and I am in the middle of writing Chapter three. I am going to post this on my Fanficiton.net account eventually...but I thought I might post it here to hear what people think about it before I get flamed. O-O;;; Does that make sense? Anyways... I don't have a title yet...

Summary: Her eyes...he knew her eyes...those were...his eyes?

Born from the conflict between Harry Potter and another, Mia Potter was sent backwards in time, a little over thirteen years earlier. Another prophecy had been made, one that only Voldemort and Mia know about, and now that Dumbledore is dead...

Midnight, on the day of his seventeenth birthday, three years after Mia came to his time, Harry Potter spots the Dark Mark above Privet Drive...


I can't write crap when it comes to summaries...okay, story next! 3nodding


Chapter 1 - Introduction

It was just past midnight on Privet Drive, and all was quiet. Dim, yellow light radiated from each street lamp that lined the empty street, and only one house seemed to be awake.

Number four, Privet Drive, cast a light at the back of a teenage boy. He looked no older than seventeen, and his baggy clothes and messy hair gave him a rather raggy apearance.

Harry Potter, a young wizard who was finally of age, was leaving. For seventeen long years, Harry had lived with the Dursleys. They were his only living relatives and as predejuce as they were towards anything magic or abnormal, Harry's Uncle Vernon had let him live at Number four. Thought, it was mostly because he was afraid of what another wizard would do if he didn't.

Despite the grim look plastered onto his face, Harry was extremely cheery. Finally being able to leave the Dursleys was like a dream come true!

Harry continued down the street, dragging his Hogwarts trunk loudly behind him, an empty owl cage under one arm. Hedwig had dissappeared for the night, and would probably return to Harry later, when he was with Ron and Hermione.

Harry muttered a good riddance as he turned a corner, silently wishing that he would never, ever have to see Number Four Privet Driver again.

Part of Harry sort of expected to be immediatley attacked as soon as he set foot out of the Dursley's house, because the Protective charm had worn off as soon as he turned seventeen.

He pushed this thought out of his mind, but pulled his wand out with some trouble. He held it clumsily, wishing he could discard Hedwig's cage.

Harry continued along, set for King's Cross. Just as he was crossing a street, ten minutes after leaving the Dursleys, a loud bang and a flash of green light from the direction of Privet drive woke many in the houses around Harry. He froze, all kinds of different scenes running through his head. Most involved demolished buildings and Death Eaters.

He needed to go back, back towards the blast. But he also needed to continue on to King's Cross. Either way, thought Harry as more lights flicked on around him, hfe had to get out of here. His knack for being in the wrong place at the wrong time might just land him with the Muggle police. Being out at half past midnight with a trunk full of spellbooks just after an explosiong, was not a good thing.

Harry turned around, abandoning his trunk and setting Hedwig's cage on top of it. He was confident that no one would touch them.

And then, the lights lining the now very awake street flicked off. Everyone was cast into an unusual darkness and Harry froze again. Not even the lights from open doors and windows were visible.

"Lumos!!" Harry muttered, clenching his wand tightly as he raised it. A light shone from the tip and Harry waved it around. he could see the sidewalk beneath him, and a little more in front, but nothing more.

As sudden as it had come, the darkness dissappeared. Harry flinched as the light came back into life. He muttered something and the light at the end of his wand dotted out. Harry's eyes travelled up and his breath caught in his throat.

The Dark Mark...

That would have to mean that there were Death Eaters, here, in Little Whinging!

Just as Harry started towards the hideous symbol, a pair of arms wrapped around him, clamping his arms to his sides.

"Oh!!! I'm so glad I found you!!"

End
PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 6:58 pm


It's quite good to me, awesome job!

King_me_Macabre

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elwine

PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 9:15 pm


veeerry niice....hurry, finish the rest, i want to know what happens!!
PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 11:48 pm


Im quite curious to see how this turns out. I'm uber interested. I've been thinking of writing my own version of the 7th book, just for my own shits and giggles.... but I'm sooo lazy sweatdrop

KitsuneTsuki



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Waffles

PostPosted: Fri Aug 12, 2005 3:07 pm


Phwee! :3 I'm glad people like it. :3
PostPosted: Fri Aug 12, 2005 3:28 pm


i wanna know who that is that found him. hurry and post!!! heart

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Mint Thimble

PostPosted: Fri Aug 12, 2005 4:26 pm


Nice. =D I can't wait to read more. And the spell to end Lumos is "Nox."
PostPosted: Fri Aug 12, 2005 5:16 pm


Oh my, that's awesome! Continue!

senior senior


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PostPosted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 8:06 am


Very Good! I started my ficcy like 2 months after school started. But yours is very good. Almost J.K. material.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 8:09 am


Awesome!

Suirou


Violet Amastacia

PostPosted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 11:21 am


It's really good. Can't wait to read the rest. So suspenseful.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 12:19 pm


deffinately one of the best I have read so far (I like reading fan-fics)

[Belle Morte]



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Waffles

PostPosted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 12:45 pm


Phwee!! :3

@Mie-tanuki: Yup!! I know :3

@devon1993991: Thank you!! :3
PostPosted: Sun Aug 14, 2005 10:30 am


its good please go back and check for typos, i couted a few as i went along. just a good idea to do some finishing work. other than that, it shows promise.

The Mason



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Waffles

PostPosted: Sun Aug 14, 2005 6:27 pm


mason_rogers
its good please go back and check for typos, i couted a few as i went along. just a good idea to do some finishing work. other than that, it shows promise.


Alex: This coming from the guy who can't use punctuation...

:c You shut up. Ignore her.

I did go through it, several times thank you very much. :3 I know it shows promise.
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