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holdingon95

PostPosted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 6:28 pm


Have you ever cried
And not know why
It's one of those times
When all of those lies
Just seem to stab you right in the back
With needles filled with false memories
But some empty shell is all that you see
And don't you ever forget the story
You told yourself at night
You would cry out of your sleepy, eyes

[pre chorus]
Don't worry I am here.
Slightly beaten but it's clear
I love you too much and that's all you needed
So here I give a rose made of all those tears
But for some reason you cry out your fears
[chorus]
Red and read and red and bleeding
A depressing sight, I'm not used to seeing
Taken Taken taken my rose
But blood still spills from your eyes
Your not hopeless your still alive

Have you ever had your identity stolen?
Seen your paranoia while it was in action
Feel like you are in a window looking at someone
Don't know if it is you
But wouldn't it be fun
To look out from the inside
Be given a second chance
But years have sanded you too blunt
Tip too sharp for a romance

Pre Chorus

Chorus x2

Stolen stolen stolen my heart
Tattooed in the middle
A rose shaped scar
Now give it back to me
And I'll give you back your sanity
Stay close and you'll be
Free

Pre Chorus
Chorus



Pre Chorus
PostPosted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 6:39 pm


I made this song by one day being as "emo" (lol jk) as I am I was doodling a picture of a crying girl holding a rose for art. I decided to freak the teacher out and colored the tears red and then coloring the rose a really light blue. I didn't notice how clever it was until after he made me draw a new one and my friend saw it first reaction-"What were you on while making this?" i replied "snowcones" then she said "cool emo and kind of creepy but clever. never wouldve thought of that." ok well she really said "you have good ideas but wut with the crappy drawing?"

holdingon95


Kumiko-Sensei

PostPosted: Sun Sep 30, 2007 7:07 am


omg!! can i use this? its a song, rite? im in a band called "broken roses" and were allways looking for great songs!! were not pro or anything, but it would be great!! well give you credit, too!!
PostPosted: Sun Sep 30, 2007 7:08 am


whoops.. i gotta change my sig!

Kumiko-Sensei

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