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 Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 9:59 pm
Hi im new here and ill start with a small poem i guess. ^_^
Oh man, as thy dream dictates, let us venture into the nght.
guided only by the clean breeze, the breath of the stars,
and the blessing of those children of the night.
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Posted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 4:57 pm
aww that's short. but i like it.
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Posted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 6:50 pm
that was awsome. short yet deep.
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Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 7:20 am
It's good - really good. Either the first or the last line needs some work, though. Venturing into the night guided by the children of the night doesn't quite flow.
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