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Kumiko-Sensei

PostPosted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 4:26 pm


sorry, i had just watched grave of the fireflies, and i decided to write a poem about the movie, its really sad, then again, so is most good poetry. w/e. hope you likes^^ <3. comment pls!!!!




I curled up
Under these fading stars
Waiting for him
My brother
Bringing my needs
My survival
My life
He holds it in his palm
Delicate as a flower
Yet he makes a fist
And leaves
“To find food”
I knew it was a lie
He never came back
Never
As I wait
Under these fading stars
I know,
Far away,
He hears me
My tears
My heart
A broken drum
Out of time with life’s graceful sonata
He hears me
Cursing him
With my last words
And my first
With my last breath
And my first
Under these fading stars
I lived and died
All my breaths came and went here
But they never will again
PostPosted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 9:24 pm


Very beautiful and somber. For whatever reason, I had a very clear image of a person sitting under an oak atop a grassy hill, with the night sky opened up above.

Shade Skypage


Kumiko-Sensei

PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2007 2:31 pm


Thanks!! I'm glad that I created a "very clear image"!
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