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 Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 7:41 am
This is a comment thread for my fanfiction I shall be writing. Please avoid posting in the story's thread by posting here. I love to get feedback on my work so I can make it better, so I'm all ears. --__^
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Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 2:12 am
I haven't gotten down to reading it yet but the pictures are so adorable! I squeed!
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Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 3:01 am
Now I have read the story.
wow. It was really good. I couldn't stop reading. POST MORE ALREADY!!!
* aww louie is so sweet*
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Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 11:50 am
I will post more later today. I would have posted yesterday, but I got caught up in Kingdom Hearts. sweatdrop
Thank you so much for the feedback. You have no idea how much I appreciate it.
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Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 12:15 pm
It's awesome so far, but the sentences seem a little choppy...Sorry. sweatdrop
And everyone gets caught up in Kingdom Hearts. xDD (I blame the difficulty of getting the Ultima Weapon, specially in the second game.)
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Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 2:51 am
Thank you. I shall definately try to improve that. ^--^
I know, but I still feel guilty.... v.v;
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Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 3:57 am
Omigawd, your story is so so so so so so good!!!
whee
Post moar. >_o ...please?
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Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 1:53 pm
Thank you. ^_________^
And I will. Don't worry. biggrin
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Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 2:40 pm
Such awesomeness!I want more!Very good! mrgreen
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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 12:55 am
Hana Maehata It's awesome so far, but the sentences seem a little choppy...Sorry. sweatdrop And everyone gets caught up in Kingdom Hearts. xDD (I blame the difficulty of getting the Ultima Weapon, specially in the second game.) and you can;'t forget the Saix the tinkel Fairie and Princess Mansex( Xemnas)
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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 12:58 am
GAH!! WHY DOES IT ALWAYS HAVE TO STOP AT A CLIFHANGER!!!! crying crying crying crying crying
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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 2:53 am
Because that's my special talent to leave people hanging on the edge of their seat. --__^
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 4:49 pm
Marina Toriama Because that's my special talent to leave people hanging on the edge of their seat. --__^ lol,. I've done it at times myself.
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 4:51 pm
NocturnalWeapon Hana Maehata It's awesome so far, but the sentences seem a little choppy...Sorry. sweatdrop And everyone gets caught up in Kingdom Hearts. xDD (I blame the difficulty of getting the Ultima Weapon, specially in the second game.) and you can;'t forget the Saix the tinkel Fairie and Princess Mansex( Xemnas) Totally. <3 Then there's KaiBar, and...PICKLE. 8D
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 1:35 am
Hana Maehata NocturnalWeapon Hana Maehata It's awesome so far, but the sentences seem a little choppy...Sorry. sweatdrop And everyone gets caught up in Kingdom Hearts. xDD (I blame the difficulty of getting the Ultima Weapon, specially in the second game.) and you can;'t forget the Saix the tinkel Fairie and Princess Mansex( Xemnas) Totally. <3 Then there's KaiBar, and...PICKLE. 8D I take it Kaibar is Xigbar right. Details please!
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