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KilljoyInsanity

PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 12:34 pm



Title-{NO TITLE YET}
Author- Goth Shadow.(Annie)
POV-Multiple
Warnings-Cussing, um some Risque humor.
Hey guys.
Um. This is my very first fanfic ever!
So please don't flame.
Note-
I have very restricted internet
access because of my mom
so, it might be like a month
before you here from me.

Prologue

Victoria's POV
-Beep Beep-
Ugh, I hated mornings.
I dragged myself off the loveley bed,
its comfiness begging me to return.
I turned around and entered my bathroom.
My eyes caught the mirror and
I shook my head in disgust at what I saw.
A very, very ghost looking pale
girl that stood at 5"4
and black raven hair that was straight to her waist.
Her chinese eyes stared at the reflection
for a minute before turning the shower on. A jet of cold water
washed the sleepiness out of her.
She went downstairs to find her parents already packed up to go. They were going to their third honeymoon. She was to stay at home.
"What the ******** are you doing just standing there?" Yelled my
father. "You're supposed to be cleaning the house and making breakfast for us!" Did I ever tell you how I hated my adoptive parents?
Yup, I was adopted, my parents died in a car crash when I was eight,
eight years ago. I'm 16.
I just stood there dumbfounded, and I recieved a slap to my face.
"Well, you heard your father!"
The b***h that called herself my mother yelled.
I did as I was told and put up with them until they left in the afternoon.
I was considering running away.
But I had a roof, food, and clothes to wear.
I couldn't. I was kind of glad it was summer, I was
happy to take a break. " Well Victoria, you'll be in college soon."
"After this vacation you'll have to go to Princeton in New Jersey, Far gfar away from your friends here in L.A. California."
I sighed thinking about this.
I wanted to get out of here, I wanted to DIE.
Well, I already have tried. Three times.
First I had cut my wrists.
Second, I had swallowed pills.
Third, I tried jumping.
Nothing worked for my MCR had saved me.
Their music and lyrics were the one of the things fueling me.
I walked to my bathroom, My place of silence and took
out a long, slender knife.
I cried knowing that cutting was my second way to escape.
The following week, my so-called parents were back and
were more abusive that ever.
That was IT. I had to go.
With tears streaming down my face I packed my clothes and electronics into a suitcase and went over to my friends house.
We were planning to go to a MCR concert that night but I knew I couldn't.
MCR would save me again, returning me to my abusive home.
I knocked on the door that was the opening to her pale home,
but no one answered. "She's probably at the concert waiting for me now." I muttered. I walked to a nearby park that was abandoned and
sat on a swing, crying my eyes out. I heard someone coming , but
I didn't even bother to lift up my head and see who
it was. "Are you okay?" I heard a familiar voice asked.
I didn't answer, I didn't want to.
"Are you okay?" asked the voice again, only it
was firmer. "No, I'm not. Now leave me alone"
I said, making it sound really harsh.
"You like MCR?"
"What? Do you have a problem with them?"
"No, It's just that I'm their rythem guitarist."
PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 12:36 pm


No comments for Annie?
Why is this guild always so empty?

KilljoyInsanity


KilljoyInsanity

PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 12:39 pm


Do I have to drink coffee
again to keep my self from being sad?
Coffe is my saviour.
So is Mychemro.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 12:42 pm


I guess, I may have to DISCONTINUE!

KilljoyInsanity


KilljoyInsanity

PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 12:48 pm


Maybe I'm just too eager for comments. Maybe I'll have to wait like a few days.
I guess.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 1:02 pm


Another update.
Applaud my pretties!!.
Note- If this sounds too much
like someone elses story or too
teenie, PM me.
I haven't the time
to read all the Fanfic stories so I'm afraid someone else might
be having the same ideas as me.

Frankie's POV

It was the night we were
having our first tourdate in L.A. for the Revenge tour.
I had left the other guys to examine the town a little more closely.
I was strolling past a park when I found a very pretty girl sitting on the swings, crying her goddamned eyes out.
I walked up to her and asked if she was okay.
She replied witha very harsh answer.
I was taken aback by many levels.
I noticed our logo on the back of a hoodie she was wearing
and asked if she was familiar with them.
She asked me if I had a problem with them and when I told her who I was,
she apologized deeply.

Victoria's POV

"I'm so, so sorry."
I apologized.
"I Understand"
He replied.
Here I was sitting on a swing in a park, when suddenly
a famous person who's in a band that saved my life comes up to me
and starts talking to me as if it was like "Wassup bro".
It was a dream cometrue!
"What's wrong?"
He asked finally, breaking the silence.
"Well, fist of all, I hate my adoptive parents.
Second, The kids at school make fun of me
and Third, I would be depressed and suicidal if it weren't for you
and the others in MCR.

Frankie's POV

Wow, she was adopted because something bad probably happened to her parents and I, we, saved her life.
"Come one let me show you something"
I replied excitedly.
"If you think you are taking me a to an orphanage then forget it"
She said angrily.
" No!" I replied.
When we arrived at the tourbus,
she started grinning.
"I'm going to meet MCR!!!!"
" It's a dream come true!!

KilljoyInsanity


KilljoyInsanity

PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 1:19 pm


I'm sorry.
I have writer's block.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 2:01 pm


No comment means no update.
These comments aren't working are they?

KilljoyInsanity


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PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 2:15 pm


Cool, first comment. Anywho, I love your story! Please continue! I just love reading fanfics!!!
PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 2:41 pm


Hurra! Hurra!
New chapter/update galore!
Aplaud for me!!!
Applaud!!!!
Note-
Sorry for any typos.


-Victoria's POV-

I couldn't believe it. One second I had ran away, and the next, I was with
My favorite band of all time. I just couldn't believe the wish come true.
"Come on, the show starts in 2 hours and I know they're still sleeping" grinned Frankie mishchieviously. He opened the door to the tour bus and beckoned me to come in. I walked in slowly and gasped with suprise. The tour bus was huge!! In front of me was a living room and stairs that led to what I guessed the bedrooms upstairs.
"Come on, I want to suprise Gerard."
I didn't know what Frankie had planned but I knew it would be good.He took a permanent marker and tiptoed quietly upstairs.
I followed him, doing the same.
Suddenly four guys jumped on Frankie, all with permanent markers also
and started drawing all over his face. I jumped back in suprise and waited until they were finished before I returned. With what was on his face, I couldn't help stifle a laugh.
Frankie now had glasses, a mustache
and the words
--I <3 My dog--
on his forehead.
All five eyes were on me.
"Well, hello there miss sexy" Gerard said.
I couldn't help but blush.
"Gee, stop messing with her,
she's my new friend!"
argued Frankie
"Well, I can't help it if
you come in with a hot girl
that we don't even know about"
replied Gerard.
I blushed even harder.
"So tell us a little about yourself"
said Gerard.

-Gerard's POV-

The trap was perfect, Frankie would return from his
walk and he would think we would be sleeping.
When he comes in to wake us up, we would all jump
on him with those fabulous permanent markers.
I was about to use the restroom when the door creaked open.
"Now guys!" I shouted.
With a marker in one hand, Bob, Mikey, Ray, and I
jumped on Frankie. I noticed someone by the door but I didn't
even turn to look unless I was finished.
We all got off Frankie and
I heard a laugh.
I turned to look and found a really pretty Chinese girl that couldn't
have been more than 16..
"Well, hello miss sexy."
I said seductivley.
Ha! Score one for me
'cause I made her blush.
"Gerard, stop messing with her.
She's my new friend."
Argued Frankie.
Jeez, did he even know I wasn't joking?
" Well, I can't help it if you come in with a
hot girl that we didn't even know about."
I replied.
Score two!
She was redder than blood.
"So, tell us about yourself."

KilljoyInsanity


KilljoyInsanity

PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 3:32 pm


You know what they always say...
More comments=more updates.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 4:08 pm


I really don't have anymore ideas.
I might discontinue it.

KilljoyInsanity


Ieros Baby567

PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 9:12 pm


Get an update! This is pretty good, but it lacks detail, and it seems to move a bit fast. Slow it down, give introductions and such. I don't mean to be critical or anything, just shouting suggestions.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 6:36 am


OM NOM NOM

keep goin!!!!

[[Shes Dressed To Kill]]


moonzeppelin8

PostPosted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 12:47 pm


this is really good, even for a first fan fic!
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