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jaw272
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 10:38 am


Here is where i'll post some poems i write as i get inspired feel free to comment on then ^_^ i love to hear what my work can bring out of people. my poems are purely emotional, i cannot write insincere works, it's a curse and a blessing. or if you want you can post a poem here for me to look at, i love to see other works, espaccally if thay come from the heart.

well enough sentimental bullcrap POEM TIME!!!
PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 10:44 am


here's my faveorite poem ever written (it's by Poe)

Alone
From childhood's hour I have not been
As others were; I have not seen
As others saw; I could not bring
My passions from a common spring.
From the same source I have not taken
My sorrow; I could not awaken
My heart to joy at the same tone;
And all I loved, I loved alone.
Then- in my childhood, in the dawn
Of a most stormy life- was drawn
From every depth of good and ill
The mystery which binds me still:
From the torrent, or the fountain,
From the red cliff of the mountain,
From the sun that round me rolled
In its autumn tint of gold,
From the lightning in the sky
As it passed me flying by,
From the thunder and the storm,
And the cloud that took the form
(When the rest of Heaven was blue)
Of a demon in my view.

jaw272
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jaw272
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 8:32 pm


The raven in the snow


While walking one day
Through the woods i lost my way
A bird of great beauty caught my eye
The bird was once thought of a symbol for those that die
a raven cawed at me and landed on my hand
Odd i thought this bird for they usually fear man
It looked into my eye and
gently pecked my sholder looking to the way i should go
i folloed this Raven's lead and i soon founf myself back in my world
this bird feared to foretell death led me back home
I thanked him the best i could
patting its head genty
it cawed and nodded then flew off
how can a bird show a human what to do?
the bird is now eched into my mind
poe's "Nevermore"
my friend.
Angel or demon, it does not matter
the black bird showed me the kindness that i thought was only human
I have tryed to model myself after this kind raven
I named it 'evermore'
Maybe next time i find myself lost in the woods
my friend will return
and show me how humans are ment to be....
PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 8:34 pm


that stared as a poem and kinds turned into a story... lol oh well if you want to see my memory of the walk i took with this raven let me know i have it written down, so i can't forget. ^_^

jaw272
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H a i k u D r e a m s

PostPosted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 1:34 pm


yay! poetry time. Bear with me folks, most of my poetry is dark, dismal and morose (are those words one and the same..? hmm).

A poem called: Suicidal?

Suicidal?
Battle thoughts.
Bad is a better place
such a dark place.
Desperate
hidden.
Years and years of pain
mental.
Death.
The better option.
Shame
accepting the abuse.
Death is permanent
an end to pain.
Forever away
everyone will miss us
and feel guilty.
Pray.
Survive.
Make a difference with your life, not with your death.

BY: me :3

I wrote this poem after reading an article about someone who commited suicide. As you can see it starts off sad, then ends in what I hope is a heartwarming message?
PostPosted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 1:37 pm


Btw Jaw, I enjoyed your poem. I liked your ryming. heart

H a i k u D r e a m s


jaw272
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 5:38 pm


World of ice

Must the world be so cold?
That the only sound I hear is the sound of my lonely footsteps cracking the ice beneath my feet?
Must I walk the expanse of ice alone?
Must the world stay so cold?
Must the people hate and discriminate?
Must I watch my own brethren tear at each other like animals?
When will the ice melt?
When will I feel the sun again?
Will I ever feel the sun again?
I will still walk tirelessly across the tundra that we have created.
Never stopping ever waiting for the warmth to come back
I walk alone.
Why must I walk this world of ice?
PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 6:17 pm


yay poems! I wish I could write -_-
gj guys :3

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