This is a beginning to a story, please tell me what you think. Thank you!
Prowling in the night, its hazel eyes shine with the dim light of the moon. Its breath visible in the cold night air as it sniffs out the scent of its prey. It's white fur blends with the snow making it seem almost invisible but for its eyes and its breath that floats up towards the sky.
A pale skinned human walks right past it an aware that he will be the next meal for the hungry wolf. The humans black shoulder length hair sways in the wind as he stalks away looking for some where safe to stay and sit out the incoming blizzard. His blue eyes scan the area once more.
The wolf pounced at the mans back, knocking him to the ground. Biting the mans leg, it tries to tear some of the flesh off. The man screams in pain and turns his gaze at the white beast before passing out from the unbearable pain. Pausing the wolf looked at the unconscious man, the wolf's eyes softened as it say the mans peacefull expression as he lay asleep. The wolf's grip loosened until its teeth were garely touching the skin on the mans leg. Moving away from his leg the wolf walked over to the mans head and grabbed the back of the mans shirt. Pulling the cloth the wolf dragged the man away. A bloody trail was being left behind as he was dragged through the snow.
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Wavering flames danced as they lit the granite walls of the cave where a injured man lay unconcious and a pale girl watched him. The girls clothes were that of a hunters, her shirt and pants were black with a black leather jacket. Her white hair was long on the sides and short on the back, hazel eyes shifted between the man, the cave entrance and the fire.
Prowling in the night, its hazel eyes shine with the dim light of the moon. Its breath visible in the cold night air as it sniffs out the scent of its prey. It's white fur blends with the snow making it seem almost invisible but for its eyes and its breath that floats up towards the sky.
A pale skinned human walks right past it an aware that he will be the next meal for the hungry wolf. The humans black shoulder length hair sways in the wind as he stalks away looking for some where safe to stay and sit out the incoming blizzard. His blue eyes scan the area once more.
The wolf pounced at the mans back, knocking him to the ground. Biting the mans leg, it tries to tear some of the flesh off. The man screams in pain and turns his gaze at the white beast before passing out from the unbearable pain. Pausing the wolf looked at the unconscious man, the wolf's eyes softened as it say the mans peacefull expression as he lay asleep. The wolf's grip loosened until its teeth were garely touching the skin on the mans leg. Moving away from his leg the wolf walked over to the mans head and grabbed the back of the mans shirt. Pulling the cloth the wolf dragged the man away. A bloody trail was being left behind as he was dragged through the snow.
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Wavering flames danced as they lit the granite walls of the cave where a injured man lay unconcious and a pale girl watched him. The girls clothes were that of a hunters, her shirt and pants were black with a black leather jacket. Her white hair was long on the sides and short on the back, hazel eyes shifted between the man, the cave entrance and the fire.
