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 Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 1:42 am
Okay, well for my English assignment, we had to compose a sonnet and all this other stuff. And since my biggest obsession is the Twilight series, that's what my sonnet is about. But it's only on the FIRST book of the series, Twilight.
It's gay though, HONESTLY. Because while I was in bed trying to sleep, I was thinking about the assignment and some words that could rhyme. I ended up making a whole paragraph and I didn't want to forget it so I wrote it down. Then I ended up writing the whole sonnet that night. Then I read it the next morning and found out it was gay. VERY gay. So I modified it a bit, but this is the ORIGINAL one. I'm saving the good one for my assignment. blaugh
Oh, and I KNOW the rhyming scheme isn't right for a sonnet, AABB. It'll look like couplets instead of quatrains but my teacher allows it so SHHHH!
HERE GOES ! x)
Reminder: This is my GAY SCHMAY copy!!!
'Twilight'
Edward Cullen and his smoldering eyes,
Makes Bella afraid; he's not like other guys.
It's not right, how could he be a vampire?
Staring at Bella's neck like he'd seen fire.
When he looks at her neck, so clean and white,
He knows that his bloodlust is hard to fight.
But they are in love, their feelings so strong.
A vampire and human, do they belong?
Together they're stuck through complications,
While Edward still fights his blood temptations.
Then here comes along another vampire,
Named James, who knows he can't fight this desire.
Edward defends Bella with all his might,
But James is thirsty, it's Bella he'll bite.
*shudders* Gee, that was gay. But you guys are Twilight fans and I just wanted to show this to someone who would know what I'm talking about (since no one in my class/GRADE has even HEARD of Twilight).
Please tell me if it's good or gay, or any suggestions.
Be polite with the criticism, you'll hurt my feelings. gonk
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 2:17 am
*Clap, clap* That was beautiful!! :'D
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 9:55 am
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Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 6:10 pm
I'll post my good copy when I get my marks back. =)
If I get a low mark it's going nowhere near public! gonk
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Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 10:40 pm
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Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 4:08 pm
datz was totallyawesomekewlness!!! rofl
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Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 4:52 pm
aha nicee i thought it was cutee
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Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 5:07 pm
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Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 5:46 pm
I liked it!!! awesome job! mrgreen
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 9:06 am
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 1:42 pm
I liked it. It must have been hard to think of rhyming words, I'm more of a rhythm scheme person.
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 1:51 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 6:29 pm
It's very good i like it! 3nodding
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