Sphinx-Rocker
if u did not want to join it than y u post . but if u dont like it then go back to sucking ur own c**k in ur lil gothic corner b***h.....oh i spelled b***h wrong BIITTTCHHHHH!!!!!!! oh and boomer thinks u should be kicked in the balls ....but i studd up for u ....i told him u had no balls
xp PEACE BIIITTTCCHHHHHH!
Actually, if your RP was literate, I'd love to join; however, it isn't, so I'm just gonna copy/paste what you wrote, correct every mistake, and then bold the corrections. Once you make the corrections, I'll be interested in joining.
Story: On one foggy night (just foggy no
full moon or any of that s**t) a comet randomly hits the city of Forsom (small town, made it up). The comet
spreads open and small worm-like
creatures crawl out.
Unfortunately the worms
squirm to the graveyards (just
our luck). The worms
attached to
dead corpses and
gave them life, but these worms
reproduce like rabbits.
It's our duty (lol doodie) to stop these monsters.
Our story starts at a crime scene
where c.b. and Austin are
investigating. (
Sirens cut off) (c.b and Austin get out of cop car)
What do we have here?
(random medic)
There's something that
triggered this man to have a heart atack. He looks only 23 so i would not suspest he wouold have a heart attack at this age.....
Austin: But if
you noticed this man's head is
ripped open.
Medic: Yea
you have a point but
I don't know what kinda monster would do that
either... Austin: Yo C.B
you're the animal man.
Do you happen to
know anything or
perhaps see any teeth marks or anything?
Correct it, and I'd join. And Venom, sorry I made an honest typing mistake. It's been corrected, but thanks for pointing it out. I appreciate it.
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