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 Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 8:09 am
an age old memory, of tales long ago, a young created machines and his home marked out by the remaining leters BED,
missing the W and another D, so strange was the experience of the dream that it passed threw generations as you see the storys were passed at dän.
four strokes to noon four to night, so says the archaic lord, acording to the a legend passed down so many milenias that the story it fits to has been long forgotten.
But now, a country at the outscrits of abandoned land somewhere past
ub-ao-ne-xia,
the great country beyond the sky, such a long time it has been since the rise of the sun above at the top of the first sky, the legend goes when epople awoke from a century long komma, to a time, long fallen bellow, not realising that the expansionist campains of the old times had long stoped the people of the new age only reaching beyond, nexia far to late and not far enougth to find them mistaken the new place for a rather cultureless oversized and week country no country want's to do trade with them, their money must be as worthless as their food, wich they only think is worthless,
of course a country with out things like milk, or different forms of bread, without delecacys, that part is true,
the food consiststs in current times only of rather cheap and easy to grow wheat bread, the soil has rather low quality, and has a hard pan going about as deep as to the stone level, emptying the place of any neutriant's the tress dont grow rather high,a dn have sharp spikes, many of which have been cut down to make early houses, that can still be seen the more recent ones are made threw more advanced techinques but are yet smaller, then the old ones, built from stone.
the valley's are doted with huge ships now over grown with grass down their much grass grow's the earth being much deaper grows trees similar to oak trees, however the place is a rather mucky plain, down their no one lives or harldy phew, and have a relativly high death rate, the place devided up into rather small countrys varrying from the size of a rather small city state to the size of one of their grand ships(about one fifth of the size new york) the vessels quite often containing cans of rotting food, acording to old legends, thou rather disproven from the witniesses down their the mountain folks get fevers when they go down and the swamp people get feavers when they come down between a rather dangerius place with hanging cliffs that can not be seen reaching sometimes as high as fourteen people, the people of the swamps have a relativly short life compared to the people of the mountains,
inbetween they can comnicate between both levels but rather the lack of food and especially, the people in the swamp areas generally can travel sligthly long distances in the minds of the people of the swamp people, but the people fo the mountains often have far better comunication between each other.
Other notes:the atmosphere goes up all the way to the moons and the rings
other then i neve actually thought how the place looks, oh and all maps are rather inacurate and quite often wouldent mark in mile high walls or huge cliffs in your way,
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 8:47 am
The tale here told begins in the plains of the
r-nea-va-hank-myion
the name of the planet is acutally no-nexia
ub-ao-nexia is the correct name to refer it as gas giant,
a low lying country compleatly put in swamps of the terain, a rather thin lying country only fourteen foot wide, and two less then five miles long.
a rather small file, of unknown importance stuck in the equipment, a long forgotten piece of evidence.
but for some reason the recording mearly shows someone having fallen of a ship and crashed down into a cloud, the rest of the information seams to have long rotted away, natural in a place were hardly anything that can rust does not apear to rot, like a mahem, the rost in the reason so thick that it elailates all the metal, over time, the harddrive long useless, many of the files unfindable,
the country directly between the borders
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r-nea r-va r-hank & r-myion,
r-myion is the western part r-myi, an independant country, and rather small, infact as large as a village, and myio is the village size a village size country on the other end in the south east corner going up another mountains viewing to the sides a fiord, that is the boundary between atleast two countrys,
the reality is that r-myion is infact not actually neibouring but that the actual neibhour to the east across the mountain slope that geos down the country r-kw-ʃha so named affter ocean blue stones found on that plain, the moss their being verry white in colour. a rather thin segment going down only half a mile wide, an a populaiton mearly 5, on both sides of the country is a rather small independant zone, which not just being small as in two to three miles wide has no population, it is also no ones land, and happens to contain almost equally hard to exit plains, wich from the north or west where verry high mountains is rather ipossible due to the climb, but from the east in the swamps one can walk up. quite far,
further to the side ot the valey to the north their is just no-one and no where, on the map miss makred as being part of the other at the side, on both sides, a wall a stone marking of the borders of the country a rather rare coincidentrence as most countrys are marked of with rather regular, and surprisingly so nearly unpassable natural borders the stone walls on both sides a rahter high compared to those the nomadic from the higher land build around their farms, the country or r-kw-ʃha begins at the other end of the valey in a rather larger place, threw wich the nomads travel threw, in this rather boring place were the battles about swamp area. covering the single nation wich to the east has r-nea a country with just a little swamp to them selves covering to other part of it almost, with dots of this country coveirng it, the rather complciated territorial devision, is paritally due to comlicated territorial agrement invocling more then just exotic weaponary, denail of service errors,and massive cybonic viruses, all of wich were inventions by paranoid polticiains whoa cutually foudnt eh insturctiosn how to build it from several million spys,
(you see the number of spys acutally out numbers the number of people living in any one country but the density of spys is rather low so verry phew countrys have spys but those that do have more spys then their entire population statistic will admit to.) however as no one knows how to make them functioning the entire exersize was worth nothing ecept a verry long rain of paranoia, that made people agree to verry unfair territorial devisions but these countrys soon split up between several countrys by anexation, wich soon got split up however durring this time the territorial suturcture was complexified with the entire thing and resulted in a system of overlapping & disjointed between regular countrys and paritally overlaping countrys which due to not wnating to be asosiceted with each otehr formed large neutral zones around each other, creating a rather system that results in pretty much half the land being a different country! aka no country! these regions are sometiems populated by people who concider them selves the natives depsite not relly being the natives, this fiord mentioned earlier the myi, happens to bored is again boredered to the norht by r-har-kar but never their has so far not been enougth organization, to find a single thing.
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School Of Dedicated RPers Captain
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 8:17 am
Your thread needs organization!
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 8:31 am
Yes i agree with the person above me...its hard to my attention to
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