Ok this was a story I started typing on at least a month ago, this is like a naruto thing with a bad like time thing, (ok in the real naruto you wouldnt see a cellphone) and I only posted 2 pages of it, plz tell me if it's good or not! I'm new to writings!
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My mom always picked up the phone on the first ring.
She always had her cell or she was always near a home phone.
I always loved hearing her sweet voice coming from the phone.
“Hello?’ She always said.
She was the perfect mom; she helped me with my training and always cared for me.
Everything was perfect.
My name is Takara Tama; I am the jewel of the Tama clan.

It was a wonderful afternoon in a simple village called Kobe; I was running down the dirt trail back home to my home, to my mom and older brother, my father had died years ago. I knocked on the door 5 times, getting 2 knocks back; my brother had opened the door and greeted me. He was always so kind to me I wouldn’t be so surprised with his name!

“ Did you get those good grades mom always wanted? Your shuriken jutsu has been rather shaky!” Hiroshi said.

“ Don’t worry big brother! I finally hit the target!” I said proudly, I seemed so full of myself back then.

I put my backpack on the floor and headed to my mom’s room, while I passed the pictured covered hallways I stopped and looked at my fathers’ picture. Everyday I do this, I wasn’t allowed to know the reason why he died, I wanted to know so badly, and I could of done anything.

“ Your early!” A voice said through the dark room. My mom, Etsu was always in that room, another secret hidden from me!

“ Mommy! I finally hit the target with my shuriken!” I said while I gave a big grin.

Like any mother did, my mom congratulated me and kissed me on the cheek. I was soon to be a kunoichi, and a proud one also! My clan looked up to me to be one, I was the last female child in the whole clan!

It wasn’t long after that my mom told me to give my uncle a few dumplings as a thank you for handing some extra weapons to me, as always I was proud to do it. I started walking, one hand carrying the basket and the other in my pocket, 10 minuets later I made it to his home. I knocked, no one answered. I called my mom, the phone rang and immediately,

“ Hello?” My mom said.

“ Mom, Uncle Akiyama isn’t home.”

“ Oh, he must have been out training with your cousin.”

“ Should I come home?”

“No, give the dumplings to your friend.” My mom hanged up.

Something was wrong, my mom never hanged up unless it was an emergency, but I didn’t return home, I obeyed my moms’ orders. My friend Ami was happy to see me, especially the dumplings.

“ Oh, and before you leave Takara, watch out.” Ami closed the door and left me confused, Ami is the confusing type but this was different. I never seen her so strict and her voice almost felt like she had a life full of regrets. I soon returned home, and always 5 knocks and 2 back.

“ Hold on Takara! This darn door is stuck again!” My brother said while trying to pull the door open. As soon as he said it, “CRASH” is what I heard behind me, I quickly turned around and was surprised to see that no one and nothing was there. By the time I turned back my brother had opened the door with a puzzled face.

“ Was there a monster behind you? “ Big Brother said laughing, “ your face is priceless!”

This is when I got scared,

“ Didn’t you hear a crash just a second ago?!”

“ No, I don’t-“ My brother got the weirdest face he ever had, “ Takara! Get inside the house!” But before I was able to say a word Hiroshi had already pushed me into the home. Everything was happening too fast, I was scared and I desperately wanted to know what was going on. Why did my mom hang up? Why did my friend tell me to “watch out”? Also, why did my brother act like something is going to attack? That’s when I heard screaming from the dark room my mom is always in, they sounded like curses.

The doorbell rang and my brother, quickly place me in a closet and said,

“ Never open this closet until everything is silent” His voice sounded terrified.

My mom had walked slowly to the door while my brother grabbed his weapons. Etsu told Hiroshi to prepare himself for she is the one to die first. I couldn’t hear her voice since she was too far away, but I was scared. Mom had opened the door but immediately fell to the ground, the last I saw of her was blood. Hiroshi placed himself in front of the closet door and started to throw arrows into the unknown ninjas, it wasn’t soon that Hiroshi ran out of arrows and collapsed himself. My face was full of fear and horror as I saw each of my family, the ones I cared for and loved fall to the ground like they were just toys that someone could just throw away. A man in a black suit came in and looked around, when he saw my mom lying on the floor lifeless he laughed.

One of the ninjas turned around and said.
“ Mr. Yori, there is still a person here.”