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 Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 2:12 am
I have been working on an assignment that is due the day after this topic has been posted. (Which is tomorrow) The story for this assignment was to be based on the Fantasy Genre, since I am also studying the fantasy genre for English.
However, when I was in the middle of brainstorming for my idea on the first day that this assignment was handed out, my friend wanted to read some of my ideas in hope of an idea striking her head. (She is exceptionally blank-minded when it comes to writing down on paper sweatdrop )
So, as you know, she read my brainstormed ideas and pointed out on one of the ideas I had jotted down and declared that THAT single idea made my whole story seem religious.
Please tell me your opinion if my friend's comment is true, I would like to know. If you already did, thank you very much.
My story is about a demon who is working (as in causing people to sin, murder, lie, etc.) for the Underworld (Which is Hell) He's never failed in his
whole demon life in making someone do what he wants (because he always picks on the people who are easy to tempt on)
One day, he decides to challenge himself, and picks on a teenage girl who sticks to her decisions (is not easily tempted.) The demon fails, and tries again, this time using his powers to control the girl's mind (With his other victims, he only just spoke to them, and he suceeded.) He fails, again! But during the process, he accidentaly acceses the girls mind and discovers about her personality, her memories and her beliefs, which soon leads to him discovering that the girl is a Christian. With that distraction he faced, he fails yet again.
The demon gives up and returns to Hell, trying to think of a way to defeat the girl. He finally concludes to showing himself to the girl, and forcing her with her fear to obey him.
The girl DOES get scared, but she calls God for help. The next day, the demon is expecting a major punishment from the girls' parents, but soon finds out that he has failed yet again. He tries a third time, but he is blocked from the girl by an invisible forcefield. The demon is defeated, and the girl is safe from any danger.
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 3:25 pm
... I don't think this topic really matters now sweatdrop The assignment's already over, and my teacher thinks that it's great.
Well, at least I finished my story without getting any help rolleyes
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 11:52 pm
I was reading through the guilds and I realized this one's died... to think it used to be in the spotlight. I'm sorry about that.
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Posted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 1:38 am
Lord Drago I was reading through the guilds and I realized this one's died... to think it used to be in the spotlight. I'm sorry about that. Eh, it's okay. At least the problem's solved now.
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 7:03 pm
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