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xEdward Hyde

PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 3:03 pm


Name: Isis “Maddie” Sinclaire
(Renamed herself, she's into Egyptian mythology. Also Maddie was a hint towards her original name 'Matthew' )

Age: 26

Sex: Female (MtF Transsexual)

Appearance: Jeans, about five foot four, somewhat athletic figure, healthy weight. Curly brownish red
hair, freckles, blue eyes.

Biography: Isis had always been the odd one out, but had carved her own place in her high school years becoming popular in her own crowd. She had finally made a realization that she wasn’t in fact gay, but transsexual. This was upon many a failed relationship and the tendencies to look at women, but in the way of wishing she was them. The woman had gone a couple of years without talking to her parents after coming out, yet now they are much closer and don’t resent her for it. Living alone in an apartment she doesn’t want to be in a relationship for the time being, and doesn’t regret such a decision. Her other relatives which she speaks to consists of one brother, but he moved to his wife’s country of origin and they don’t talk much anymore. The few reasons for this lack of communication is a light air of awkwardness as well as the distance. Isis had gone to college and now works with computers and anything of the like. One of her current occupations is working part time in a hospital managing patient data with a few other people. Isis is considered to be more of a tom boy then a ‘girly girl’ and is attracted to either sex.

Personality: Isis has a hard time knowing when to stop joking and generally judges people within the first moments of meeting them. She holds a grudge for long stretches of time, and probably can be a little too mean. She can fake being nice to people but it isn’t a habit. Yet, she is extremely open with affections when it comes to the people she knows well (meaning a year or so). You have to prove to her that you’re worth being nice to. It also takes a long time to get her into a serious relationship, and she doesn’t lust for people far too often. Yet if you ever get her to fall in love with you, she will be overbearing and a hopeless romantic.

Occupation: Computer Programmer (She calls herself a ‘code monkey’ because she loathes her job)

Likes: Jonathan Coulton, Daft Punk, yoga, classic horror movies, constant noise, sleeping, lights, red bull, tab, any sort of junk food, dancing around, sleeping naked, doing high kicks, and spending hours on her laptop, clay models of skulls (She has two in her room, one being small and the other being a little larger), food network, G4, painting(Which she is decent at, not very good, but decent), and taking showers so hot that they numb your ability to feel it.

Dislikes: Rude people, annoying people, feet, not being able to move around, having someone grab the back of her neck, ignorance, tongue clicking noises, and people who cry for no reason, musicals, people acting like they know her perfectly or try to be her friend when they’re not.

Other: Doesn’t enjoy long walks on the beach and is an easy drunk, hence why she doesn’t drink anymore. Isis loves gardening and cats as well. Also, she has a secret crush on Billy Mays, the orange clean(amongst other cleaning products) spokesman.

I might just start keeping a semi daily journal of 'her' days so I can explore her some more. I would really love some comments on Isis and feedback. I want to make her as lifelike as possible.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:38 pm


seems ok

Sinmodonly


xEdward Hyde

PostPosted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 6:07 pm


Mercyonthesoul
seems ok

Thank you! =] Anyone else have anything to say? I took her to the Mary Sue litmus test and she got a one, but I do think there's more that needs to be added or subtracted.

So, anyone else have any advice?
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05 Character Profiles and Development

 
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