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 Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 5:32 pm
Do you guys and girls think I'm ready to go into the arena? here's the description I'll be adding:
I'm a child. but more of a prodigy. born and raised to do what I do. Firebend. I battle all who oppose me. and win. There's no doubt in my mind I will win. Nothing else can bring me joy. Except my friends. But they left me. Because I hurt them. My power, my life, and my curse. Do I deserve this? Do I deserve the power in front of me? the fire on my staff, the fire rushing through me, just waiting to burst out. Unimaginable power...it feels good. But I hurt all who come. Once again, It is my power, my life, and my curse.
So once again, do you think I have a chance? Please tell. Thank You.
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 5:34 pm
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 5:47 pm
Why is nobody coming? Do you think I smell like poopie? I smell like Strawberries!
Join me! I have Bagels with Cream Cheese! (c)
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 6:39 pm
At the moment the guild isn't "that" active. Some people come by but not a ton of people yet. (I wonder how many people will come back on Sept. 21)
And don't worry about bumping. At the rate this guild is going at the moment, this thread will be on the front page for awhile.
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 7:39 pm
It needs more it looks kinda plain....
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 9:20 pm
yeah, the clothes should be more red. also, shouldn't this be in the off-topic subforum? >.>
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 9:25 am
oops my bad. okay thanks for the comments. Well, I didn't want it to be really red because he's not that fancy. Kinda like an on-the-street wanderer person. But I'll see some other clothes that could match it.
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 12:34 pm
KidPinoy oops my bad. okay thanks for the comments. Well, I didn't want it to be really red because he's not that fancy. Kinda like an on-the-street wanderer person. But I'll see some other clothes that could match it. even on the street wanderer firebenders wear red, from what I've seen.
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:15 pm
Yes, I would make it red.
Really, I think you need more accessories and just all around better clothes.
You really just look like another annoying n00b with a single donation item entering the arena and wasting their money.
I'm sorry this sounds really mean, but I'm just saying what I think of it. I hope this is constructive criticizum (sp?) and I'm not just being mean...
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 4:36 pm
I don't find it mean at all. thanks. yeah, I'm gonna buy some more stuff. not gonna go to the arena because I realized it's a waste of gold. thanks everybody.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 3:07 pm
how does it look now? Pretty firebendy huh? hahah I'll change the description now that it looks different. It's like a neutral-firebender-street-warrior-type-thing.
Post what you would rate it if I put it into the arena. please post. thank you!
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 3:16 pm
FrostDragon44 It needs more it looks kinda plain.... yeah i agree.. its still pretty cool though..
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 4:31 pm
Hmm.....
Presonally I would lose the mask.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 4:34 pm
Mage Negi Hmm..... Presonally I would lose the mask.
I agree.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 6:34 pm
Yeah, loose the mask and the sneakers; when have you seen a firebender with sneakers? get black or brown boots, and something to serve as the cloth that goes around the waist (like one of the egyptian set, although I can't remember if there's a color that'd match). Also I wouldn't sugest not having some kind of over-shirt, but I can't think of any suggestions at the moment.
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