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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 4:35 pm

I'm fairly new at it, so...I'm not looking for too harsh of critiques. I've improved somewhat since these were taken, but still..any tips on improving?

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PLEASE ignore the arms. I know they're hideous in this pic. I promise they're not always like that. xp

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Holy cats. These are bad. I HAVE improved, I swear. Ew.

But still, any comments are welcome.

Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 9:05 am

well since you say you've improved, i'm guessing you might have fixed the only real thing i saw wrong.

your feet weren't as crossed as they could have been, but it was still very good for being new to pointe. ^_^

and in the last pic, i can't tell if t's because of that floor, or just the way your shoes look, but it seems like you aren't quite all the way on your box.

but you look great.

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kageodori-chan
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 12:38 pm

It doesn't look like your are completely over your box on the second picture, so stretch thse feet! Hopefully I'll get to see pictures of the improvments you made! blaugh But, pretty awesome for someody new to pointe.

Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 2:30 pm

Thank you!

I agree about the second one, and not being over the box, I'm working on it, but I still have that problem a bit.

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