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 Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 3:12 pm
Post here for discussing the story, giving my compliments, pointing out stupid mistakes I make, or if you wanna tell me where to go next with the character. I have lots of tiny stories in my head, but not a big way to connect them, so giving me areas to go to with the character and maybe a situation helps a lot. I'm mostly doing this to practice my writing, so critiquing is good too.
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 11:33 pm
How is it a Roleplay if others do not play a role?
Should be moved main forum, imho.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 1:21 am
Write a response where you are a journalist critiquing the story. Be creative~
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 6:02 pm
It's good, but mechanostriders are actually based on plainstriders. :]
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 9:20 pm
F a i t h s R e v e n g e It's good, but mechanostriders are actually based on plainstriders. :]
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