`Vedic
Flow's a little inconsistent.. what you may want to try doing is just taking a few practice runs as you write to the song.. start the beat where it should be, and rap what you have written out loud to it. Don't be half-assin' these tracks, man. Practice like you're a pro, and you'll be at that level in no time.
what he said and when you record just try to memorize your lyrics before you drop em to a beat when you read it makes you focus on the paper rather than the beat which you should be focused on which will give you more confidence better flow and you can add feeling to it