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 Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 5:26 pm
Seeing as one who has looked for the first time; a babe as fragile as the world itself, wimpers in the coolness of the night.
Callapsing, faintly aware of the life to come, I fall deep into a place where only I am welcome; into a world like no other.
A place of music and dancing. Where sadness never resides. No one is ever unwanted and not one person suffers.
Children are born and live. Men and women always love and the weather is always autom.
Can a place where pure beauty flureshess be found? Where is this utopia? Is it only in my mind?
Deep within my heart, unable to be known; like a child drawning in the ocean. Though I kick and strugle, I am always knocked back down just to feel my lungs burn.
How can I escape this soap opera? Why is it so hard? Can I ever finish the race? Or will I fail as always?
Flames of passion to never be quenched. A star crossed love never to be fate. As one new to enchantment, I spred my wings to fly, but to no avail.
Awaken me from this nightmare! Save me from this horrer! I look for my knight but see not. Although I smile, my heart aches.
Forgive me for all I do. I can never prevail! Give me your strength, for with it, I can fly!
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 5:55 pm
This one, i like because it poses the popular yet never cliched question "Why?"
It ask whether utopia can be found outside the mind, but yet the utopia you describe is imperfect. The paradox fits the forced scenario of life in a way, a very hyperbolic way, but insightful nonetheless.
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 7:06 am
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 7:07 am
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 3:26 pm
Good idea. I like it. biggrin
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Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 2:14 am
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Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 1:17 pm
i Personally think that you have some great tallent i would like to hear more. if you ever get the chance either pm me and send me one or post another and i will always comment on your work Good Job...................
The Darkest Feyt
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