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ObscureFortitude

PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 5:13 pm


Waterfall Prayer


Soft, gentle, misting water falling upon my face
Its cool, weightless drops penetrate all surfaces of my skin
Tall, majestic, and powerful does it stand

Soaking up its beauty, I stand in awe
Hardly believing the delicacy of its Maker's craftsmanship
The soft roar that comports a restless soul
Floods into my ever-listening ears

Could the same decisive hands that created this wonder
Be the same careful hand that delicately crafted me
Just as the giant, gentle roaring waterfall
I am beautiful in my Maker's eyes

I am His child; Christ's child
PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 5:48 pm


This particular prose, especially that last line, stands in stark contract to the last one you posted. Obviously, something happened in that time to change your outlook? Or perhaps...i misinterpret Deaths Shadow.

Chimera XIII


ObscureFortitude

PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 6:05 pm


lol. There's a time gap between when I wrote them both. So, yes. My outlook did change a bit. You're very observent. wink
PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 6:37 pm


Thank you, but now, the atmosphere of Deaths Shadow seems more like disappointment then hate...

Chimera XIII


xSexyAznGirlx

PostPosted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 7:22 pm


this poem is so nice
PostPosted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 7:27 pm


this poem really is nice

Lily_Cute_Princess


Chimera XIII

PostPosted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 8:39 pm


Why do people comment on yours, but not mine? Its not fair!
PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 2:08 am


that was so, so beautiful, you've done a Great job  

Alyssanya

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