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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 1:20 pm
Remember the rules--You write a somewere around a paragraph, but not just something like 'Reks yawned.' You can play as the other characters if needed. Just please remember to type IN FULL SENTENCES. That means PROPER grammar, not substituting 'to', 'too', or 'two' for '2'. You will be spelled the way its meant to be, as will ALL OTHER WORDS. I understand if you just generally suck at spelling so basically...No chatspeak, no l33+, nothing like that. Alright? Alright. EDIT: PLEASE! If I catch you using 'u', '2', or anything stupid like that, I will message you and ASSAULT your mind. Meaning that is Warning 1 that Ybbor gives people. Oh, and I will alert him :] (Because I am a Vice Captain tehe. Watch out bitches.) EDIT: I'd prefer it if you used past tense, like in normal stories. So make 'says' into 'said', etcetera. Also, PLEASE use your character's name while typing. Meaning, don't use 'I told him to catch a bus...'. You should use 'Harrun looked over at him and sighed. "Go catch a bus."' or '"Go catch a bus, moron!" Harrun murmured.' or any variation of whatever you wanna say. EDIT: I'm not trying to be a b***h, I'm trying to save the English language. Thank you. EDIT AGAIN: OOC means Out of Context. Meaning its for the one lined side conversations for if you have to go or something. I'd prefer if you had it written like this: [OOC]: Sorry, I have to go for [x amount of minutes/hours/days/whatever] I'll be back later. EDIT: If I catch you, it will be a warning. You get 5 warnings for this particular thread (because apparantly I'm a b***h) and after that it results in 1-10 days suspension from the guild. Make sure you read the rules :]
START!
Students bid fare-wel to their familys as the train's engines rumbled. Harrun sat in a compartment all to himself, a small spotted cat in his lap. Another year at Hogwarts... He thought as the train started moving and students began looking for empty compartments.
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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 2:54 pm
Loona walked down the hall. All the compartments she asked to sit in rejected her. She finally reached one with only one boy sitting in it. She opened the door and asked "May I sit in here?" She said smiling slightly at the boy.
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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 3:49 pm
Harrun looked up. "Sure... Why not..." He mumbled, releasing his gaze and looking at the ground.
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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 4:00 pm
Eric passed by the compartments, all already full, until he came to one containing a boy and girl. He slid the door open and asked, "Hey... mind if I join you two? All other compartments are full... oh, and don't mind the sword.. I use it for protection."
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Kage_of_Shikyo Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 4:54 pm
Loona turned toward the window, looking at the scenery speed by. "So what are your names?" She asked the boys. "Mines Loona Malfoy..." She said turning toward them.
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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 5:08 pm
Eric sat down next to Loona and said, "I'm Eric San. I'm a fourth year Slytherin student... and.... don't worry, I'm friends with Gryffindor."
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Kage_of_Shikyo Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 6:30 pm
Ryoku stood on top of the train.
((I couldn't think of anywhere else...thought that would be cool...^_^;; ))
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 6:11 am
Eric noticed some rumbling on the top of the train. "It's probably that kid that always stands on top of the train every year.... what a weirdo..."
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Kage_of_Shikyo Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 10:13 am
Harrun looked up as he heard footsteps from the roof. "I'm Harrun Hiki.... Griffindor." He said, not very interested in the smalltalk.
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 10:31 am
"Hey, there's Hogwarts..." Eric said, pointing out of the window. It looks somewhat different... hmm.....
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Kage_of_Shikyo Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 10:36 am
As Hogwarts came into view, rain started falling. "Thank god we don't have to take the boats in..." Harrun said, as the rain became heavier.
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 10:36 am
"Yeah..." Eric said, still looking at Hogwarts. "Hey... doesn't it seem a little... different?"
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Kage_of_Shikyo Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 10:47 am
Harruns looked at the castle. "Come to think of it.... it does seem alittle different...."
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 10:50 am
"It seems.... dark....." Eric said as a food cart stopped by and the lady slid the door open, asking, "Would you two care for something." "I'm good.."
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Kage_of_Shikyo Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 10:54 am
"Ah h-hey, um, could I come sit in here?" a tentative voice asked from the compartment doorway. "I-I got kicked out of my seat... I'm Ki-ki-kiara," the girl blushed deeply and twiddled her black hair with one finger while holding up her trunk with her other hand.
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