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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 11:44 am
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Before you say anything, i know i have another thread out right now. But i wanna get imput from you all before i present this to my band. And if i put this in the other thread, more than likely, i wont get a response. (the subject tends to turn people away) Ok.. here it is, Its called "Loss For Words"... because i cant think of another name atm >.<
(verse 1) How strange the effect Of Your beautiful name To find myself unable to speak Unable to think Only to bow down before you Jesus Christ, My Savior my King How is it that you laid down your life All to rescue me?
(chorus) At a loss for words My heart cries out Open to You in complete surrender Lord, I'm desperate for more of you And You're all I'm living for Lord come in and take over And let Your will be done.
(verse 2) Humbled in Your presence Bowing face down, I'm offering myself to you My living sacrifice What right do I have to stand here before You? And who am I to ask of you When You've already gave it all? Here in Your presence I found myself struck with awe
(chorus) At a loss for words My heart cries out Open to You in complete surrender Lord, I'm desperate for more of you And You're all I'm living for Lord come in and take over And let Your will be done.
(verse 3)Fallen on my knees Here I am to worship You To give back the praises well over due So take this heart of mine Take it, and never give it back Mend it Fold it Remake it and do with it what you will Forever I am Yours
(chorus) At a loss for words My heart cries out Open to You in complete surrender Lord, I'm desperate for more of you And You're all I'm living for Lord come in and take over And let Your will be done.
I've made so many revisions to this its not even funny. It would look good. then i'd read it, then change it. then it'd look good.. over and over again. The chorus i changed at least 5 times >.<... so... is it any good? or is it not good for a worship song (this is the first I've written)
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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 1:16 pm
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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 8:48 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 9:09 am
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 8:21 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 9:44 pm
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 10:35 pm
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 12:55 pm
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 8:26 pm
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 10:05 pm
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