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three patch problem

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 6:29 pm


This is the character I use for Pokemon roleplays involved with my plot. Rate it?

[Tsukiko, Atsui, and Yuuki]
Barely five feet in height, Tsukiko has a slender, lithe figure with powerful legs meant for running. Wherever she happens to be, she runs at least a few miles a day, knowing if she fails to do so she'll become restless and therefore, even more of a timebomb then she already happens to be. Despite her small stature, she emanates a powerful aura, and is obviously not one to try picking a fight with.
♥|| Height//Weight:; 5'1":: 101lbs.
♥|| Eye Color:; Dark Emerald green.
♥|| Hair Color:; Black
♥|| Markings:; As a result of trying to tackle a wild Sneasel in her youth, she has two claw-shaped scars on the left side of her face, halfway on her lower cheek and halfway under her chin.
♥|| Clothing:;Tsukiko's opinion is that one can't be happy if not comfortable. She wears loose black cargo pants embellished with green, with comfortable running shoes. Her upper body his clad in a black undershirt with a white blazer over it. Only the middle two buttons are closed on the blazer, and it had green buttons and green Pokeball designs down the side. Her head is clad in a green Pokeball bandana, a loose belt where her Pokeballs are stored hangs around her waist, and finally, around her neck, is a black velvet choker with a Pokeball charm of ruby, silver, and onyx.

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      Tsukiko Shizune

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      The cruelest age, as many a study shows, happens to be t h i r t e e n~!

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      Men are from mars, w o m e n are from Venus.

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      Pokemon Coordinator

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      Little Brooktown, nestled in the trees~

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      N//A

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    • Rain, rain, don't go away! Tsukiko is a lover of the rain. Visibly, her mood improves when the clouds roll in, and when the rain pours, she's as happy as can be. She tends to get sick because when it rains, she'll surely be out there in it, getting drenched, and she's totally content that way.
    • Gluttony, much...? FOOD. Tsukiko will eat about once a day, usually in the evening, around dusk. But when she does, no food in the surrounding area stands a chance. She'll eat a LOT, and then she'll be out running once more. But she loves food.
    • And the winner is...Being on stage. The feel of preforming for an audience gives an adrenaline rush unlike anything else imaginable.When on stage, she won't stress, and she visibly relaxes. That is, until the winners are announced, when she tenses once more. And if she looses, she explodes.
    • Snuggling by the fire with a good-Reading. Surprisingly, she loves reading quite a bit, and tends to read anything she can get her hands on, even cereal boxes.
    • I'm not touching you...Irritating people. Her mischevious side also pokes out whenever she's bored, and she takes the greatest pride in being able to annoy almost anyone.


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    • Look at the pretty lights...Thunder and Lightning- despite loving rain itself, she's absolutely terrified of actual storms, and tends to look for any small place upon hearing thunder or catching a flash of lightning.
    • Liar, liar, pants on fire! Dishonesty and lying bugs Tsukiko to no extend. She can't stand people who cheat for their own benefit, and she'll never lie on her own sort of 'Code of Conduct.'
    • Ego Bigger then his head.Arrogant people. She knows no one's perfect. Despite being confident in her ability, maybe even a tiny bit too much, she can't stand those thinking of themselves as invincible.
    • Mommy, it's dark in here! When Tsukiko can't see herself or anyone else, she gets extremely nervous. She's a bit jumpy in dark conditions, and even the most mundane sounds like a Taillow chirping will freak her out. Therefore, she tends to either stay away from, or move quickly through places like forests, where night falls quickly.

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      If there's one perfect word for Tsukiko, it's tempermental. She has a short fuse and gets annoyed quite easily, and her flaming temper gets her in trouble a lot. She's stubborn, hardheaded, and wont back down from even the most pointless fight. Despite all this, when she's not annoyed and she's calm, or when it's raining, she's pleasent enough to be around. Witty, sarcastic, playful, and mischevious, she can have plenty of fun and make people laugh, as long as they dont make her explode.
      ღ_When Pleased:://. Rainy days are her happiest, and if she's eaten a good meal and she's calm, she'll be fun to be around. She tends to fall into a prankster mode when she's bored and has nothing else to do to entertain herself, and quick and sarcastic comebacks make for some fun.
      ღ_When Angered::// You'll know when she's angry; you can practically feel it in the air, a palpable, scary heat. If you don't feel it, you'll see it in her eyes, flaming with fury. She get's angry when disagreed with, when proved wrong, when annoyed, or when she loses, and you'd be best to stay out of her way when she's in a fit of rage. It's rather scary, and despite her small and skinny stature, it can be quite intimidating as well.
      ღ_When Saddened:: Tsukiko's the kind of person too confident to show weakness. If she's upset or sad, you won't know by her manner of speaking or acting; she'll be the same witty, easy-to-anger girl. But her eyes will tend to give her away when she's alone and upset; however, she'll try her best to cover it up.
      ღ_Pros:: -Mischeviousness Tsukiko knows how to amuse herself and others. She'll do the most silly and simple pranks just to have fun, and even when her acts are stupid, she still finds a way to make other's laugh.
      -Kindness Despite her fiery nature, Tsukiko worries a lot about those she becomes close to, and if someone's in trouble, she tends to help even if it could hurt her herself. It's a natural reflex she can't prevent.
      -Intellect Hours of reading and delving in all kinds of information of all types have made Tsukiko pretty smart, even to a point of annoyingness. No one can tell her she's a lot of talk and no brain because of this, and she's good at getting people out of tight spots with things she'd learned from reading.
      ღ_Cons:: -Pride Tsukiko is confident in her abilities as a Coordinator, and more confident in her Pokemon. Losses are a big blow to her pride, and she'll tend to sulk.
      -Rage Anything can set her off, even when someone means no harm in what they say to her. Her quick-to-anger attitude makes her clash with most other people.
      -Solitary Tsukiko has a sort of 'Lone Wolf' attitude. She thinks all she needs is her Pokemon, and no other people, because she hasn't had anyone else for as long as she could remember. But if anyone could break that attitude, she'd be the best friend you could have.
      Bad Habits:
      • Getting angry quickly.
      • Pulling on her hair or twisting it around her finger.
      • Spacing out if something doesn't interest her.
      • Biting fingernails.

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      Tsukiko's story, if anything is quite simple, though she prefers to keep it to herself. Born into the small town of Brooktown, her mother died right after naming her in the time after her birth. The woman had been a rather infamous Coordinator, looked down upon when she'd settled down with Tsukiko's father to have a family instead of traveling once more. Her father and older brother, Ryo, raised her, but her father often away from home, so Ryo was basically her brother, father, and mother in one.

      She'd never been close to her father as he almost always came back, (If he did at all,) drunk. The man wouldn't abuse physically, but he'd yell quite a bit. She never understood what he was saying as a small child, but she did understand something had to be wrong. Ryo introduced her to Pokemon of all types, and he, five years elder then she, taught her about contests, as well. She never felt any interest in raising Pokemon to knock each other out, and wanted to be a coordinator with all her heart. Then came the time when Ryo himself left to be a Coordinator, but before leaving, he caught her a single Pokemon; her Houndour, Atsui, and told her to keep it for when she left herself.

      Her days until she was old enough to travel with her father were spent mostly by herself, as if he wasn't at work, he was out drinking. She became self-sufficent, doing things for herself. Despite his lack of parentage, she loved her father still, always cooking for him and doing things.

      Ryo had promised to come see her on her thirteenth birthday, when she was old enough to qualify as a Coordinator, but he never did, something that lingers in Tsukiko's mind; did he choose not to, too busy with his new life, or was something preventing him from doing so?

      She didn't know, and didn't know if she wanted to truly find out.

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      She doesn't want to be the best Coordinator in exsistance, but wants to live up to everyones expectations of her being as good as her late mother.

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      N//A

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      -Species: Houndoom
      -Name: Atsui
      -Gender: Male
      -Lvl. 16 (Caught by Ryo at 12, evolved with Tsukiko)
      -Ability: Flash Fire- Prevents Houndour from being attacked by Fire type moves, and also boosts it's own fire type moves
      -Moves:
        -Flamethrower
        -Smog
        -Bite
        -Sunny Day

        -Species: Taillow
        -Name: Yuuki
        -Gender: Female
        -Lvl. 6
        -Ability: Guts- When Taillow is aflicted with a status condition, it's attack is raised by 50%.
        -Moves:
          -Peck
          -Quick attack
          -Wing attack
          -Double team


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        N//A

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 6:18 pm


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three patch problem

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TanManDown

PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 11:44 am


Whew... that was quite an extensive description, and I am very impressed. I'm not too familiar with Pokemon, but I was able to understand almost everything you had to say about Tsukiko Shizune. I have to say, for the kind of childhood she had (no mother, hardly a father, one brother), her personality fits rather well. Even the fact she wants to be a Coordinator (not sure what that is, though) makes sense: she never knew her mother, and this is one of the few ways she could feel like she could "connect" with her. Not sure if my guess there is accurate, but it fits.

On a side note, I was highly amused by the headings you had for each section.

So for a score, on a scale of One-to-Awesome, your description is Amazing. Pretty much the only thing I could find wrong with it were two spelling errors... no joke. I'm highly impressed.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 1:21 am


Haven't read the bottom half yet but so far it's already really good. :3


And, I see that you are an AFI fan? heart

FallingAshe


Excellent_Person

PostPosted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 4:49 pm


it looks pretty good, form what i read, at least. not too many coordinators out there. mostly just trainer meatheads
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