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This is my first try at a fan fiction...if you like it, comment on it, and I'll post part II...criticism is greatly appreciated!! biggrin I wonder how badly I'll get commented... razz
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Shopping With Alice


Bella665: Help, Edward!!!!

xEdwardx: Auto Response from xEdwardx: I love you, Bella, and don’t worry! =]


grrrr... He never responds when I truly need help. It’s true I wanted to be with him, but… I’ve decided, as my own little experiment, I’m going to stay away from him for a day. Just ONE day. I couldn’t last any longer if I tried anyway, as in being normal with out him at least, I know I’ve lasted longer, as in MONTHS with out him, but why would I go through that again? I’m trying to see how long I last before going crazy…and I’m not doing too well. The reason is Alice, that’s pretty much why I IMed help to him, so…I wasn’t really breaking my experiment, soon I most likely would though. But anyways, about Alice, our last IM conversation was NOT FUN. For me, at least, she was having a great time. Here’s how it went.

Alice<3Jasper: Hi Bella!

Bella665: Hi, Alice.

Bella665: What’s Up?

Alice<3Jasper: Well…Since you asked. Do you want to go shopping tomorrow? Since today, you’re trying to avoid Edward? How THAT workin out anyway? I *thought* you <3ed Him! ]=[

Bella665: Just a little experiment, ok??!! Though it IS killing me, if that makes you feel happy. I can just imagine his cool lips against my neck, his eyes boring into me, everything.

Alice<3Jasper: As much as knowing how appealing my brother is to you… I don’t really care. Lol, j/k. sry to offend you… heh!

Bella665: It’s alright, he’s your brother I understand.

Alice<3Jasper: Ok! So…Shopping?

Bella665: NO.

Alice<3Jasper: Great! I’ll see you @ 10:00 AM, ur place!

Bella665: Wahhh???!!

Alice<3Jasper: I’ll bring Jasper and Edward to carry our clothes k? Cya Tomorrow! Can’t Wait! And oh, good luck on ignoring Edward! Cya!

Bella665: Avoiding! Not ignoring, and He knows why I’m doing it. Just TEMPORARILY. U KNOW I CAN’T STAND LIFE W/OUT HIM!!! Wait!!! I said No!

Bella665: NO.

Bella665: NO.

Alice<3Jasper has logged off.

Bella665: ----

This is what led me to IM Edward for help and support, so it’s not my fault my experiment failed. Oh! Finally! Edward replied.

xEdwardx: Coming in a second, Bella<3

I sat for about 5 seconds, and then he appeared, on my bed, as if he had never left in the night before. “What’s wrong? I thought your experiment wasn’t over.” “Alice is taking me shopping, with you and Jasper. You know how I feel about that,” I spoke with a slight air of depression, “and my experiment failed. I literally can’t stay away from you.” He breathed a sigh of relief, and I looked at him with surprise. “I’m just happy about the effect I have on you.” He said with a shrug. He got up and steered me over to my bed, sitting down with me in his lap. “You’ll be fine, I’m coming, remember?” That made me brighten quite a bit, and he noticed. Lifting my chin with the gentlest of all touches, he leaned his face towards me. I actually stayed still for once, still slightly depressed, but not enough to stop my heart from reacting. “I’m going hunter with Emmett tonight, will you be all right alone?” he asked softly. I scoffed. “Sure…I’ll see you tomorrow morning.” “I love you, Bella.” He said, while kissing me one last time. “Hurry back.” I replied, sadly, yearning for his return already, though he was still in front of me. He put me down on the bed, and got up swiftly, then disappeared. I sighed, getting ready for a night without him. Oh. Jasper’s online now. IMing’s so new but fun!

Jasper<3Alice: Hey, I hear I’m going shopping tomorrow.

Bella665: *groans* Edward was just here trying to comfort me, I was trying to forget, thnx. But, yes, you heard right. It’s all Alice’s idea, as usual.

Jasper<3Alice: Ha-Ha, you know she loves to shop. Especially with you, evidently. I need more books to read anyways. I haven’t read a new book in 2 weeks.

Bella665: She does? Great…. Hey! Maybe I'll go with you! I haven’t found any good bookstores around here anywhere.

Jasper<3Alice: You are not disappointing my wife. I’ll get the books for you.

Bella665: You are sending me straight to hell, u know.

Jasper<3Alice: is it really THAT bad?

Bella665: You tell me, you’re the husband. But hmmm….lemme think for a mere second. YES!

Jasper<3Alice: I just stare at her when I go.

Bella665: That works only for you ok?! Besides, I can’t stare at Edward; I’ll be shoved into dressing rooms all day. He’s not going to stop Alice! He hates the mall!!! I’m *dead!*

Jasper<3Alice: You’ll survive. She’s not killing you or anything, just going shopping. Ok?

Bella665: but---

Jasper<3Alice: I g2g. Alice is preparing an “outfit” for you.

Bella665: AHHH!!! Seriously PLZ!

Jasper<3Alice: Sorry, she’s my wife, I <3 her. Good Luck, I’ll see you tomorrow, please, don’t kill yourself.

Bella665: Right now, I feel like that’s my only option.

Jasper<3Alice: ur kidding, right? It’s NOT THAT BAD! For all I care, you can have Edward in the dressing rooms with you!

Bella665: hmm…that sounds a ton of a lot better!

Jasper<3Alice: Alright, good. Cya!

Bella665: *sighs* bye…gonna die. Hey! That rhymes.

Jasper<3Alice has logged off.
I sank back, feeling defeated, by Jasper, Alice, and Edward. What on earth was I going to do? By the next morning, I’d be thoroughly exhausted from my thinking about escaping shopping and also of course, what outfit was Alice preparing?! I decided to finish my homework, stupid science. What did I care, when I was anxious about everything that would happen tomorrow? I hate shopping and Alice knows it. I just think that shopping for food is better than shopping for expensive clothes. Bad example, but it is slightly true. Oh Well, I guess I’ll have to just be patient, and wait and see…

I agree about using the IMing, I think phones wuold have been better- I mean they use cell phones all the time. But other than that I really liked it, good job! biggrin

Hmm. Pretty good. It's just that you shouldn't use IM.