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hi, i really want some feed back on my rp character, i want to see if there is any possible way to make it better. thnks ^_^

Name: Sasha
Age: 18
sexuality: bisexual
bio: she seams to be a nice, quite girl who is happy living with her family, the trunth is, she is plotting their death, she has no sense of horon or any close friends. she always sits on the sidelines and watches evrything that is going on from afar.
app:

Well, first off, it's better to give a first and last name. It shows that the person is more concrete.

Check your spelling.

Be more descriptive and say what caused her to plot their death. Did they do something wrong? Are they being used by someone? Is she being used by someone? Does she want to take over the world? Why does she sit on the sidelines? What makes her so reserved? Why doesn't she have a sense of Honor? What happened to her? Was she raped? Is that why she doesn't trust anyone? Are her parents abusive? Is she a wallflower? Did her crush hurt her emotionally? Just be specific.