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Helen Sullvan, Slytherin 5th year [Not Accepted]

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Amelia Gearhart

PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 11:10 am


I would like to use the Slytherin girl #3 from the premade characters.


Name :Helen Sullivan
Gender :Female
Age :15
Grade :5
House :Slytherin

Ethnicity : British
Hair Color :Light brown
Eye Color :Voilet

Pet : Her pet barn owl, Orris
Wand :Holly and Unicorn hair, 10 3/4 inches

Family : Her parents run a potions shop in Daigon Alley, but they live in the countryside. She has two younger twin brothers, they are nine years old.Her parents names are Ari and Anne. They are both muggle-borns. Her twin brother's names are Roscuro and Ravvus. They are not identical, but you can still tell that they're twins.

A Bit About Him/Her :. Apperance: She is about 5'9" and weighs 120 pounds. She is very clumsy and trips and stumbles a lot, wich is why she never made it into the quiddich team. Helen has only a few friends. It taked her a long time to trust someone.. She dosen't like to read at all, she prefers to learn by doing. She has an aptitude for potions, probably because she'd been around them for her whole life. Helen can get angry very quickly, and a lot of younger students are scared of her. If you wanted to tell anyone a secret, Helen would be the one. She almost never tells other people's secrets. She is only so trusrworthy because she likes knowing things about people. But, if the oppurtunity rises, she will not hasitate to blackmail people with secrets.

A Moment By Himself/Herself : Helen hated the trip to Hogwarts. She always managed to get herself stuck in a compartment full of first years. But all she has to to was sit silently and glower, and they left her alone. That suited her just fine. Once in a while she would catch one of the students staring at her when they thought she wasn't looking.
Am i really that fascinating? Helen thought. Well, i guess i was somewhat like these little kids when i was a first-year...
It was kind of amusing listening to the young students talking about the houses they wanted to be sorted into. None of them ever talked about being in Slytherin. They even all said how it was a bad house to be in.
It was also fun to see their faces when she came back to the compartment wearing her Slytherin robes.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 2:35 pm


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(Post edited by Magnolica, as to not screw up the post count.)

For a while now, due to the amount of "shy, reserved" characters we've been receiving, we've been aiming for the more extrovert ones. But if you could justify why is Helen like that, it would be better.
While your profile is overall okay, it still seems a bit underdevelopped. Try to write a bit more as far as RP goes, and maybe even when it comes to her description.
Also, you might want to give a name to your mother, father and siblings.

Please PM Magnolica after you have all that covered. Thank you.


Please remember that all other posts beyond the first are reserved for our use. Feel free to go crazy in the OOC forum, just not here. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

Veon alNeowyld
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