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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 11:02 am
Ya know... I said I wouldn't... but I can't help myself. XP She's too damn cute to resist. I'd like to own female Ravenclaw premade #2, please. After this, no more. Not. Another. One. And if I try to, remind me I said that, Ska. X3
Name : Kathleen Cosgrove Gender : Female Age : 15 Grade : 5th year House : Ravenclaw
Ethnicity : Irish (duh!) Hair Color : Red and blue Eye Color : Green
Pet : N/A Wand : Mahogany, 12 inches, Dragon heartstring
Family : Father- Connor Cosgrove (Muggle) Mother- Alyssa Cosgrove (witch) Brother- Carlin, 3
A Bit About Him/Her : Kathleen is a very enthusiastic older sister, and loves taking her younger brother on "adventures." Her favorite class is Transfiguration and although she struggles a little, she thinks the challenge of it is fun. She's no outstanding student, has no desire to become a Prefect or the like-- though she wouldn't turn it down if she was offered-- and really prefers having fun with spells over learning the provided materials. Kathleen is a good student and passes all her courses with little trouble, but her favorite thing to do isn't study: it's goofing off. Then again, what student doesn't prefer goofing off to studying? Unfortunately, Raveclaws. Yes, she is the stereotypical Ravenclaw in that she's smart and likes learning new things, but it has to catch her interest first, or she'll struggle through it because she just doesn't care.
A Moment By Himself/Herself : "Katleen! Ah, Katleen, get down from there wit' your little brother!"
Kathleen looked down at her mother from the tree branch she and Carlin were secured on and smiled. The older witch was so used to her daughter doing seemingly dangerous things like that that she wasn't nearly as scared as another mother would have been, even if Carlin was only 3.
"Okay, okay. I'm coming!" She called down, scooping Carlin up and causing the baby to laugh. "Come on, little brother. Let's go show Mum you're still okay."
Holding a hand over her broom, it jumped into her grip without needing to be told and Kathleen secured herself a seat on it, using one hand to stay steady, since the other was holding her brother to her.
"Hold on now, Carlin."
"'kay!" He exclaimed, wrapping his arms around her neck to secure himself. Kateen-- as he called his sister-- had taken him up on broom plenty of times, and the boy was no more scared of flying than a bird was.
The trip to the ground was taken carefully; Kathleen would never hurt her brother. When they finally set down, Alyssa was tapping her foot, but she seemed more exasperated than angry. She knew Kathleen took care of her brother, but she would really prefer that the girl didn't take risks anyway. Carlin was still too small for some of the dangerous stunts Kathleen pulled, and she even did them when he was 2!
Alyssa sighed. "All roight. Get yer broom and bring it t' th' house. Lunch is ready." Knowing her daughter would follow, Alyssa headed for the house.
Kathleen smiled at Carlin, who grinned back with all his little baby teeth in evidence. "Come on, little brother."
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 3:03 pm
I would like to see more of a family description, but other than that everything is alright. I like how you transferred the accent into your writing, it's great. Welcome to Hogwarts. smile
Please remember that all other posts beyond the first are reserved for our use. Feel free to go crazy in the OOC forum, just not here. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.
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