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 Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 7:31 am
page 373.
stoppd.
that's been bugging me since i read it the night before last.
did anyone else find anything bizzarre like that?
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 7:43 am
katgems
page 373.
stoppd.
that's been bugging me since i read it the night before last.
did anyone else find anything bizzarre like that?
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 7:53 am
There was a sentence in the beginning somewhere that Charlie said that bugged me - it wasn't wrong, just really awkward. I don't have my book right now, though, so I can't look it up.
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 7:56 am
That was bugging me too...
>___o
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[The_Amazing_Chocolatier]
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 5:50 am
sorry, but I had to post my say of Eclipse on this forum because I assumed you wouldn't have so much spoilers by the looks of you topic name =)
No, I haven't read it.
But now, I'm going off the computer to stab myself.
I think i pretty much know the story.
It's in white, so highlight is you want to read it:
Here's what I think happens in Eclipse.
There's a love triangle between Edward-Bella-Jacob.
Everyone just keeps saying that the hate Jacob in Eclipse, and I saw some pictures and banners saying, "It's time to choose" and there's a picture of Edward and Jacob on opposite sides and then Bella in the middle.
THAT'S MAKING IT TOO OBVIOUS!
Then, someone posted a comment on a forum saying "highlight to read it, it's not so much of a spoiler" so I went on and read it.
The person said, "I think it's brave of Bella to say no in the end".
And that's left me thinking, it's not so bad to say no to Jacob, but if it's brave of her...does that mean she said no to Edward?!
I can't imagine!
And also another banner saying, "Make your decision. The one you love or the one who loves you."
Does that mean Edward doesn't love her in Eclipse?
I'm over-thinking now!
OH CRAP.
I am SO buying it tomorrow.
and PLUS. I've already stopped liking Jacob in New Moon, he became a freaking 'tard. Imagine when I read Eclipse. eek
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 6:30 pm
I wanted to take a pen and squeeze in a e. D: but I knew it would ruin the book.
I remember there was one part in New moon where they tried to say 'they' but it said 'the' instead.
My friend is borrowing the book so I don't know what page.
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 7:12 pm
Dude, didn't even notice. I was way too into the book to actually look at the individual letters rolleyes
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 7:24 pm
Falls to the ground Dude, didn't even notice. I was way too into the book to actually look at the individual letters rolleyes same here
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Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 2:31 am
F a k eM e hL o v e Falls to the ground Dude, didn't even notice. I was way too into the book to actually look at the individual letters rolleyes same here oh... well, i'm an editor by nature....
i'm editing my friend's werewolf story, and it's realy good, but i always have to see when something is wrong.
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Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 3:57 pm
I HAVEN'T REREAD THE BOOK YET AND THAT'S WHEN I NOTICE TYPOS. IN NEW MOON, I FOUND LOADS. THERE IS SOME REALLY SHOTTY EDITING.
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