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Darkflame Angel

PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 7:20 am


Lets leave this place and say that we escaped
We'll say that there's no difference between right and wrong tonight




Two girls are in a pre-school together, their names are Emma and Jada. When they met, they instantly became friends and their family had many confrontations, but none went well.
Then one day, Emma went to Jada at the playground, she looked very sad. Jada instantly wanted to comfort her friend. "Why you cry Em-Em!" She whined while going to hug her, but Emma took a step back. "My mommy says your mommy stole my daddy... My daddy don't come see me no more." Jada shook her head. "No! No! My mommy said he was helping rebuild the house!"

From then on Emma never spoke to Jada, but soon they were in middle school.. Jada was crushing on a boy who not the most popular kid but every girl agreed he was good looking but then one day, when she was finally going to talk to him, little miss tomboy comes out of her class and grabbed his hand, Jada felt shocked.

Now Emma is in college, and Jada is at home with a baby and her boyfriend. Her boyfriend leaves for a minute, without saying something so Jada goes out to follow him, only to see the new college girl talking to him and laughing at the cafe` across the street. Jada is furious, and looks to a gang for comfort, who in case confront her boyfriend, and kill him. When Emma finds out the news she is crushed, he had become her bestfriend, they were not dating! Emma cries to her brother, who influences her to join a rival gang of Jada.

Now they are both older, both broke, and very shook up, gangs are making rounds and the two meet. Jada is furious, "You stole my boyfriend AND my crush!" She screamed raising a gun. "b***h you stole my father and my future!" Emma yelled louder taking out her gun. Suddenly three shots were fired, one hit Emma, one hit Jada, and the other bullet hit the cop behind them.

In the emergency room, both mothers cried by their child's side, one mother looked up, puffy eyed and raspy "You started this!"She mumbled. The other mother turned, but only nodded, "Lets not make their mistake... I'm sorry." Then she broke down into shuddering sobs. "I only wish I had said it sooner."

Moral of the story, Kids shouldn't hold grudges for what their parents do.



We'll leave no trace of plans that we have made
So they can't find us and take what is ours
PostPosted: Sun Sep 02, 2007 12:06 pm


I really like the moral of the story.

DedtheKyd
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Darkflame Angel

PostPosted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 1:33 pm


Lets leave this place and say that we escaped
We'll say that there's no difference between right and wrong tonight




I see a lot of it..



We'll leave no trace of plans that we have made
So they can't find us and take what is ours
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