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Joysweeper

PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 9:13 am


Quester Info
Username: Joysweeper
First timer (y/n): Yes.

Character's name: Kennedy Carpio
Creature: Invented Creature; a joysweeper.
Category: Small Person with a dash of Drake
Elemental type: Earth, Time, Water.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 9:42 am


Note: Numerous pictures are in this thread. As I am a rather mediocre artist, readers shouldn't take them as literal interpretations. Think of them more as guidelines.

Full Name: Kennedy Carpio (Car-pi-oh)
Nickname: N/A (might answer to 'Nedy'. Daydreams about being called 'Lincoln'.)
Reason for Such a Name: I found a girl named "Kennedy" in my yearbook. She would have been Dakota Kennedy, seeing as there are plenty of Kennedys unrelated to the deceased President and the still-living politicians, but then I decided that she would be Filipino-American. Carpio is my grandmother's maiden name.
Sex: Female
Age: 23
Height: 5'2 in tennis shoes
Weight: 144 lbs.
Hair: Very dark brown, looks black when wet.
Eyes: Very dark brown, look black except from about a foot away.
Ethnicity: Mixed. Filipino-Caucasian.
Dominant hand: Right, like most of the world.
Physical weaknesses: Needs glasses, has nasty mown grass allergies.

Physical Description: Kennedy is fairly short and stocky, with relatively short, thick legs and arms. Her hands and fingers are rather small, or so she believes, and usually wrapped around something, be it a book, a camera, or just the straps of her purse. Her face is squarish and compact, with thicker-than-fashionable eyebrows; the corners of her mouth are naturally a bit downturned. Her hair is oily, slightly longer than shoulder-length, and usually tied back.

She looks something like this:

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As a Filipino-American, Kennedy bears a slight resemblance to other Filapinas such as Vanessa Minnillo and Cristeta Comerford. Her bust size is fairly average, but she has almost no other curves. Kennedy hasn't got much patience with fashion, so she tends to favor boy's outerwear, T-shirts and cargo pants in particular. On her feet are usually bulky sneakers and thick white socks.

From day to day she wears contact lenses and wireframe glasses to correct her nearsightedness(anything more than six feet away might as well be a Surrealist painting otherwise), a single small gold earring in each ear, and a coat of lipgloss where appropriate. Unless there is a special occasion, she rarely wears any other jewelry or makeup. Her nails are cut as short as she can manage, and both toe and finger nails are painted indigo blue, her favorite color.

Occupation: Camera(wo)man. She helps with filming and sometimes film editing at the campus news station. Also volunteers now and again with the Humane Society.

Residence: A small city built around an equally small college near Chicago, Illinois.

Likes: Fiddling with cameras, swimming, sharks, cats, reading science and psychology-related books and magazines(fiction or non), sci-fi, classical music, standing in the wind, history, and feeling secure.

Dislikes: Being stared at, overt rascism/sexism, obsessive people(religious, political, musical), being forced to care for small children, obnoxious music(meaning screaming stuff, loud rap, and whining songs, as well as anything overplayed or too noisy), celebrities, people who deny the existence of global warming, people who jump to conclusions and/or will not stop talking. She also hates the insult "retard" more than just about any other.

Phobias: It's worth noting that Kennedy has no true psychological phobias, but she becomes very anxious when confronted with long-legged spiders(tarantulas are okay), heights, and public speaking.

Skills: Can work a camera, can manipulate video. Is a runner; endurance, not sprinting. Can climb trees and weave a basket. After some coaxing and a few false starts, anyway.

Hobbies: Making a montage set to music, reading about space travel, caring for animals, going on mild hikes.

Personality: Kennedy is quiet and generally shy at first, and will let someone else do all the talking with no argument, but she can be loud and boisterous if someone else doesn't take the lead or gives her enough of an opening. She leans slightly towards "optimist", but is realistic enough to know that things will generally go wrong. When angry, she tends to bottle up and go unresponsive; if someone else has been dominating conversation this may not be noticed.

A stickler for honesty, Kennedy is reluctant to blame someone whom she doesn't think is at fault. She tends to favor logic over emotion and is fairly easygoing. When alone she may rage and weep quietly, but in company she tries to appear unemotional and collected. She prefers getting out of the way and watching(and recording!) to leading or following. "Wish I could be a fly on the wall," is a common thought of hers.

She isn't too good at body language cues; she notices them, but doesn't always know what they mean. Kennedy is also quite blunt, to the point of seeming rude. Often when someone is upset or angered by her she becomes confused, not seeing why her behavior would provoke such a response.

Finally, Kennedy shows a few kleptomaniac traits. She won't shoplift, but she tends to pick up and carry off things that catch her eye, mostly rocks and sticks and string. She'll handle things that aren't hers, but only rarely will she take them.

Defining characteristics: She's a bit paler than she could be, due to spending so much time at the camera and the computer, but her heritage still makes her appear tan. Her glasses make her eyes look somewhat smaller. Someone speaking with her might notice that her gaze is sometimes kind of fixed, and her facial expressions are often either frozen or slightly exaggerated. Socially inept, she has been diagnosed with very mild Asperger's Syndrome, itself a form of high-functioning autism.

Religion: Kennedy's father was Catholic, like most people in the Philippines, but converted to a Protestant branch when he married her mother. Kennedy herself is nominally Protestant, but not devout by any stretch of the imagination. She disagrees with several parts of the Bible and hates it when people interpret it literally.

Things on her: A T-shirt(white) reading "Same shirt, Different Day", a loose and pocket-laden set of boy's shorts, white cotton socks, a digital watch whose face would doubtless crack at some point, and battered gray tennis shoes. Kennedy would have had her contacts in when she came to Athlaias, and they would have gotten lost in transition. Her glasses would have been in her purse, but at some point they might be lost, stolen, or broken. Her purse(sturdy and inexpensive) also contains an old handkerchief tied around a bit of green clay made useless by detrius, lipgloss, a little hairbrush, keys, a flashdrive and a DV(digital video) tape, her wallet, a paperback edition of "Good Omens" with a coupon for tomato ketchup as a bookmark. Various folded pieces of paper, mostly old brochures and a scattering of plans for filming, might be in her pockets. Smooth rocks that are pretty when wet and a good deal of assorted knotted-up strings round out her collection.

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Joysweeper

PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 10:07 am


History: Kennedy's father worked with his sisters at a club attached to a US military base in the Philippines. They waited tables, were receptionists and hosts, dated the pilots and sighed over the SEALs... he trucked boxes. When his sisters married, he went with them to the States... and continued trucking boxes while working on a degree in medicine.

Kennedy's mother was a high school History teacher. How the twain met is a complicated tale involving the sisters and an escaped parakeet, a tale which will probably never be told. Eventually they were married.

Kennedy has one sibling, a girl one and a half years older named Reagan(Their mother has a thing for presidential names, and wasn't quite bold enough to go for Roosevelt). Reagan is taller, prettier, and skilled at tennis, but her grades aren't as good. She's pretty close to her sister, but they have their fights. One of these fights happened just prior to the transition, and may become a source of guilt.

Like far too many parents in the United States, Kennedy's parents divorced; however, they remained on friendly terms and lived relatively close together. It was still painful for the girls, but not as bad as it could have been.

Kennedy's always liked being behind the scenes, working on movies. Credit isn't important; making something fun is. She helped film and edit together a few of the popular viral videos that made their way onto the web; let's call them Behemoth, Epidemic, and Chicken Lizard Man.

At the time of transition, Kennedy is fully entrenched in college, spending a lot of time studying film.

Pukka: Still debating. Probably a very delicate silver-colored chain bracelet with one or three small pearl drops. Kennedy would have seen it at the campus's lost-and-found box. She would have taken it after being told that it had been there for over six years without being claimed(it was taken and made into a pukka very recently); testing it by grating her teeth over the pearls, she would have found them to be too smooth to be real pearls, but they would not have felt like plastic or glass. She possibly would lose or trade it away sometime after arriving in Athlaias.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 8:57 am


Creature: Joysweeper

That's the same word as your username.

Yep. I use "Joysweeper" on nearly every site that I can. It doesn't let anyone identify me, it's never taken by anyone else, and it's simple.

"What the heck is that? A broom with a smiley face?"

Not exactly. The simplest description is "fairy with dragon wings and a tail".

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"So why not just say "dragonish fairy" and leave it at that?"

Because that's too simple. Too human, and in pictures a fairy's wings, even when draconic, are too wispy and sprout out of the small of its back, which isn't very practical. Joysweepers are more like little human-faced dragons, physically. They look relatively human, but...

So, here goes. Full description.

A Joysweeper has two wing-arms and two humanlike arms. The wing-arms are positioned exactly like human arms are, opposite of each other on either side above the ribcage. The human arms are positioned like a Tyrannosaurus Rex's arms, closer together and in the front.

Wings bear a similarity to those of pterosaurs; there is a visible arm, and the last finger is dramatically long and thick, attached to the wing membrane. Numerous thin struts, like bat fingers, run through the membrane, stiffening and strengthening it. The fingers near the wrists, the ones not attached to membrane, are long and thin and bulbous, tipped with slender, curved claws. One finger on each wing is fully opposable; winghands are somewhat less dexterous than secondary hands, but they are well adapted to climbing and defense.

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Bulbous fingertips on winghands house venom glands; Joysweeper claws are hollow like hypodermic needles. The venom is no more potent than that of the average honey bee, painful for a short time but neither debilitating nor deadly. The wings usually bear muted colors of brown and green; like an anole, they change occasionally, but are unable to produce the complex colors and patterns seen in chameleons.

They fly well. Hovering is exhausting and only possible for short periods; soaring high in the air is also tough. Flight would most likely be in a series of flutters and swoops, and it wouldn't be much faster than a human sprinter. Joysweepers are more agile than fast.

The chest of a Joysweeper, proportionally larger than that of a human and boasting a bigger ribcage, bears a massive, protruding keelbone anchoring flight muscles. The humanlike secondary arms are on either side of this. Structurally and proportionally they are identical to human hands and arms, except that the smallest finger has thickened and become almost opposable. Shorter than the wingarms and soft and clawless, secondary arms are placed well enough for most uses but cannot get at the entirety of the back, mostly due to wings being in the way.

They've got birdlike respiratory structures; lungs are a bit smallish, but coming off the lungs are air sacs, anterior and posterior; they take up a great deal of chest space and occupy portions of the hollow bones. Joysweeper air sacs, like those of birds, allow much more efficient breathing- a good thing, because a lot of oxygen is burned in flight. No gas exchange occurs in the sacs; an inhaled breath goes into the lungs, then into the posterior air sacs, then into the lungs where oxygen is exchanged with carbon dioxide, then into the anterior air sacs, and then it is exhaled, fully spent.

My Joysweepers are omnivores. Metabolisms are pretty fast, though, and digestive tracts are shorter and less efficient than human ones, so high-energy foods are pretty much craved. And something with considerable mass and little nutritional value, like translucent iceberg lettuce, could make them sick.

Joysweeper necks are proportionally just a bit longer than human necks. Their faces appear to have human proportions from the front, but they are actually slightly elongated; a look at the skull in profile reveals a small, catlike muzzle and protruding eyebrow ridges. Nostrils are a bit larger and more prominent, the better to suck in more air more quickly. Joysweeper "hair" is usually short, light, and downy, but heavier, longer humanlike hair does occur. It comes in all the standard human colors; as in humans, darker hair is dominant, lighter hair is recessive.

Joysweepers have slightly longer, sharper canines than humans do. Irises are somewhat larger and the pupils of a Joysweeper are vertical ovals, sometimes looking like slits. Eye colors aren't too exotic, and vary between individuals. The "third eyelid" or nictitating membrane is fully functional in a Joysweeper, closing to cover the entire exposed surface of the eye and opening to tuck away in the eye's inner corners. The third eyelid appears white and opaque from outside, but can be seen through from within. It is protective in function, closing when in flight or fear.

Joysweeper ears are stereotypically elven, long, slender, and pointed sharply, reinforced with a great deal of cartilage. The ear tips are almost level with the top of the skull when upright. Muscles at the base of the ear point, swivel, cup, and flatten it according to whim or emotion.

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In this case, Joysweepers are tailed, and thus have a posture that is less vertical than a human's. The tail would probably serve a balancing function, particularly during flight. Tails wouldn't quite be prehensile (although they would be able to curl around things) but neither would they be entirely stiff. How long and thick the tail would be, and whether or not it's forked or tipped with anything, isn't decided..

Although the wings and tails would both be covered in tiny keratinous scales, the individual scales themselves are difficult for the human eye to see unaided. Body and facial scales would be smaller still; the ones on forearms, shins, keel, and forehead would be somewhat larger, more visible than any others. The body scales, like those on wings and tail, also change color from brown to green, but they are paler in shade. Joints, fingertips, eyelids, and parts of the ears would appear scaless, but still change color with the rest of the body.

They would be oviparous, infrequently birthing large, leathery eggs one at a time after five months of gestation. Like birds(again), Joysweepers would have all-purpose cloaca instead of individual orifices. Mating is a "cloacal kiss" instead of the mammalian way; males can't pee standing up. Which might have made a male character fun... ahh well. I don't plan on spending any more time on the reproductive system.

In terms of the senses, Joysweepers have hearing that's pretty close to human-norm, although due to size and the outer ear structures it's a bit more sensitive. Eyesight is similar; perhaps a little sharper and marginally more color-sensitive, but night vision isn't as good. Taste and smell are severely diminished in comparison to humans, but Joysweepers still have preferences.

Touch is perhaps more unusual, and highly developed. On most of the body there are fewer touch receptors than on a human. The tiny scales over most of the body harden the skin, making it less sensitive. Touch receptors are clustered in the scaleless fingertips of all four hands, the membrane of the wings, and the ears. These sensitive areas function similarly to cat's whiskers or the lateral lines in fish, detecting currents, vibration, and temperature changes. (Of course, fish don't lat-line temperature. But you get the picture.)

Sizewise, Joysweepers vary. Anywhere from seven to fourteen inches of height is "normal", with males usually being slightly smaller than females. Legs are a bit small in comparison to torsos, but not extremely so. Wingspan isn't much more than twice height, and no less than one and a half times said height. Tails are no longer than height.

In this case, Joysweepers have small, decorative bony-cored horns. These may be two slightly larger ones in the classic draconic position on the sides of the head, three tiny points framing the base of the ear, a short, thick spike at the corners of the jaw, a sharp point in the center of the forehead, or any combination therein. Possibly this would also come with a row of small spikes running down the spine.

Feet and lower legs are likely to be extremely birdlike or draconic, probably digigrade and clawed, although these claws would lack venom glands. They would be adapted for grasping and climbing, like the primary hands.

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Joysweeper

PostPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 7:11 am


Placeholder for now. Since I can't spend 24/7 on the computer, the time I can devote to this is limited.

Naturally, in the unlikely event that I do win a flat, such stages will be at the artist's discretion. This is a rough outline/guess.

STAGES:

Dormancy: Human all the way to the bank. Her hair and skin will suffer and she'll desperately wish for a razor blade, her hands may redden, blisters will undoubtedly form, and her clothes will be slightly damaged, but she'll be human.

Awakening: Slight lengthening of ears and teeth. A webbing, sot of like loose skin at this stage, will form in her armpit region and tiny nubs will stud the little fingers of her hands and the undersides of her arms, making it painful to lean over a table. Her bust will diminish, but if palpated then two bony lumps will be felt very close to the ribcage. Her hands will get a bit longer and thinner, and her little fingers will become longer and considerably thicker; toes will stretch a bit. Ribcage will expand somewhat, and she will have lost a head or so of height. Not visible, the biggest change would be within the enlarged ribcage, where airsacs form and start functioning. They expand with each stage. Her tailbone will extend somewhat without stretching the skin; she may or may not grow a true caudal appendage later on.

Metamorphosis: Maybe three feet tall at this point, the nubs on the undersides of Kennedy's arms and on the farthest finger will expand into multijointed cartilage structures that bear some resemblance to spider's legs. The membrane will have spread, perhaps connecting the structures, but maybe not. Distorted, stretched hands, particularly the pinky fingers, make her a bit more alarming. The inner corners of her eyes will become a flimsy membrane that slides halfway across the eye as a reaction to pain. Teeth, ears, and eye color will continue the relatively minor change. Her bust will resemble that of an adolescent boy's, but swelling fist-sized structures to either side will warp her profile. They would be bony-cored and have joints, but the musculature to move them wouldn't have grown in yet. If a tail is to form, it would be about as long as her hand, and fairly limp at this stage.

Evolution: Now undergoing serious shrinkage(sorry, I couldn't help it), Kennedy would be little more than a foot tall, and not very happy about it. The chest-buds would have expanded into fragile-looking arms with stubby webbed fingers, functioning clumsily, like an infant's. Her breastbone would have jutted out hugely, and the only remaining sign of the breasts themselves would be dark spots in the appropriate places. Anchoring muscles would start to develop in earnest, and Kennedy would start having a nearly uncontrollable urge to exercise her long, awkward arms, the pinkys of which would be nearly as thick as her wrist. Wing membranes would be nearly complete at this stage, but real flight would still be impossible. Since her legs would be mildly weakened (possibly broken at some point), Kennedy might have to rely on others for getting places. Like tabletops. This will not make her happy.

Genesis: If Kennedy has a tail, it grows in earnest now. Her face would push out slightly and the new arms would lengthen; rather than stretching, the flesh and skin between the fingers would die back, leaving them remarkably human-looking. She would shrink one final time, legs becoming more draconic, with small claws and clinging toes. Airsacs finally catch up with the rest of her body, and tidal breathing becomes a thing of the past. Wing muscles would expand and settle, and venom glands would become operational now. Her hair might change, but remain the same in color.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 8:39 am


Magic: It's true that Small People tend to develop magic, almost as compensation for their diminished size, but Kennedy is also in the Drake category. Any magic she gains access to would be very minor- slight empathy and a weak healing factor, perhaps.

Over the course of the transformation, Kennedy's eyesight would improve, maybe all at once, maybe a little at a time. If it's not all at once, there would likely be a point where her glasses and her naked eye were equally blurred and confusing.

Mental: The transformation would gradually make Kennedy more outgoing. More likely to initiate conversation with strangers, mostly, but also less reluctant to ask for help and admit when she's in trouble. She'd become a bit more gregarious around people who feel friendly but, on the converse side, she'd start to take it more personally when they don't. Fortunately, although she might become quicker to take offense, she'll also become quicker to put things aside once they aren't as fresh in her memory.

Alterations that don't involve interacting with others include a certain degree of claustrophobia - at 100%, if she's put in a drawer or a chest she'll probably freak out - a near-inability to stand still if she's not reading, sleeping, or listening to someone, and cravings for honey and fish, although she'll quite happily eat just about anything put in front of her.

Kennedy's kleptomania would not necessarily get much stronger, but she would begin to steal. Not often and not from anyone that she likes, but if she doesn't think she'll get caught and sees the chance, she will take it. If she ends up getting to know and sympathize with her victim, the stolen item will probably find its way back.

Why a Joysweeper? There is no great irony in Kennedy becoming a Joysweeper, but doing so would do interesting things to her quirks. Kennedy prides herself on the appearance of self-reliance, but deep down she's very aware of just how much she needs others. Becoming a Joysweeper would mean becoming very obviously dependent on others, particularly at 75%. 100%, conversely, would allow her to be almost fully independent. Kennedy also likes to claim to be entirely asocial, and the change would bring out her gregarious side. Finally, as a human Kennedy really dislikes being touched, but as a Joysweeper she craves physical contact.

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Joysweeper

PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 9:15 am


Sample RP:

"It liiiives!" Forked lightning split the sky and thunder boomed simultaneously as the mad scientist laughed in triumph.

Kennedy felt a yawn coming up and didn't bother to suppress it. Maybe back in the fifties this had been suspenseful and dramatic, and the first few times she'd seen a scene like this had been interesting, but now... The camera angles were nice enough, she supposed, and although it was in black and white things were clear enough to see easily, unlike a couple of the previous films.

She couldn't think of anything else remotely complimentary about it. Any longer and she'd go crazy. The girl stood, stretched the kinks from her arms, and snagged the purse sitting on her desk.

"Aww, don't tell me you don't like it," Kennedy's roommate drawled from her half of the room. "This one's a classic, and this is the best part! C'mon, stay a bit longer."

"No, thank you. I'll just stretch my legs a bit," Kennedy demurred. Anything to get away from that campy acting. She'd been bored - long weekend on campus, no homework - but not that bored.

"Okay, but you'll come back, right? I don't want to be alone when this is over.

"Sure. Twenty minutes, tops." Closing the door firmly behind her, Kennedy stepped out of the dorm, blinking as she realized that not only was it late evening already, but a light sprinkle was falling from the sky, spattering her nose.

Well, I won't melt in the rain, she reminded herself, and then nodded in response to someone from one of her classes acknowledging her with a wave.

Rather than return to the B-movie marathon, Kennedy set off at a fast walk. Her hand snaked into one of her pockets and found the delicate chain with the little stones that she'd picked up earlier today. She'd stopped at the campus lost and found to see if they'd held her favorite bracelet. They hadn't, but this had caught her eye, lying limp and forlorn beneath the moldering old clothes.

The lady behind the desk said she wasn't sure, but it seemed like it had been there for a good while, longer than she'd been working there. So Kennedy had palmed it, expecting to add it to her collection of worthless junk.

But she hadn't gotten around to that yet, so here it was, still in her pocket. She pulled her hand out and wrapped it around the edge of her purse.

Kennedy glanced around then, seeing if anyone else was out in the light rain. There didn't seem to be anyone in view, so she abruptly broke into a run, purse thumping against her hip, feet splashing through puddles.
PostPosted: Tue May 06, 2008 7:01 am


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A somewhat better picture.

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