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My RPC (i would like peoples opinions)

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kale-otogakure

PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 6:35 am


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kale
failed experiment 6 of 13 in the nekona line
a super soldier designed for extreme combat, kale was supposed to reulutionise the world. but his entire line failed, and was terminated. kale escaped extermination by killing the scientists.
the metal covering his left arm cant be broken by anything in the unverse.
He is undyingly loyal to his friends and loved ones, sacrificing anything to protect them. very easy to befriend and very trusting, 6 kale is the best bodygaurd anyone could want.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 8:28 am


not bad, but it needs more detail in the bg and perhaps a full body image, not just the head and part of the torso.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 9:42 am


It's good, but I think having the metal covering completely indestructable is a bit boring.
Usually everything has some flaw or weak spot.
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