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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 7:58 am
Name : Steven Takeshi Gender : Male Age : 14 Grade : 4th year House : Ravenclaw
Ethnicity : Spainish/ Asian Hair Color : brown w/ blonde tips Eye Color : Hazel
Pet : An Egyptian Mau kitten by the name of Toby Wand : Teak 14 1/2" unicorn hair and dragon heartstring
Family : His father Li Chou was from Japan (muggle) and when he went on a business trip fell in love with a spanish witch and had Steven. When he found out that his new wife was a witch he moved away but is still married to her.
His mother Andrea is of medium height and build but the real thing that stands out about her is the air of confidence in herself and her child that she puts out. Her personality is usually relaxed and a bit eccentric (she teaches muggle studies at the school of magic in Spain, and it carries over into her life sometimes) but when she is angry she goes on the warpath. But she is a great mother to Steven and she has made peace with her husband.
A Bit About Him/Her : Steven is quiet when he is by himself but when he is with his friends his is no minor player. He is goofy but he can also be serious if the need arises. Even though his father was from Japan he doesn't lok it the only thing left of his asian heritage on his are his last name and his eyes which are only slightly canted. He really likes sleepping, quidditch, and he somewhat likes learning he hates stupid (meaning just plain dumb not mentally handicapped) people, idiotic rules, and potions class. Overall he is a fun person but he can be a bit grumpy if you mess up with his sleep
A Moment By Himself/Herself : (A sample RP bit.) "Steven! Steven you get down here right now!" The shrill voice shouted. The fourteen year old boy stirred a little on the roof. "Don't make me bring you down my self" "Hmpf, coming mother!" he said as he picked himself up."Damn, she always interupts me when I'm sleeping. Oh well maybe it will be something interesting this time." he says as he climbs down the stairs. As the sun beats down overhead he walks to the front of the house, A fine example of Spanish architecture with stucco walls and a red tile roof. The only thing that stands out about it is that there is a small garden on top of the house where Steven was just sleeping. As he walked into the house his mother said, "You have not finished your charms summer homework." "Why does it matter?" he said as she moved about the kitchen while making dinner. "I can just do it later, I 've got three weeks till school starts." "But sweetie," she said as she sat down at the table "we still have to get all your school supplies and you know as well as I do that Diagon Alley is much better than that rat hole here, and besides I've been talking to Aunt Tina up in London and she said that she would be delighted if you would stay with her the last two weeks before school starts." "Fine." he said walking toward the stairs, "I'll finish the essay I don't have that much left anyway." "That's my boy" she said as she got up. "Oh by the way you got a letter from your Uncle John.
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 8:04 pm
I like that rp sample, I do. Shows imagination and creativity. My only gripe is that i saw a few grammatical errors. But if you just reread your posts before submitting and use the forum's built in spell checker you should be fine. Welcome to Hogwarts. smile
Please remember that all other posts beyond the first are reserved for our use. Feel free to go crazy in the ooc forum, just not here.
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