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 Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2007 8:00 pm
Name : Danielle Cho
Gender : Female
Age : 11
Grade : First year
House : Ravenclaw
Ethnicity : Korean
Blood : Half-blood
Hair Color : Black
Eye Color : Black
Pet : A black cat with white socks and a white dipped tail. Female, named Shina. A sweet, calm dispositioned cat that Danielle had since it was a kitten.
Wand : Demiguise hair, Rosewood, 11 inches. (A slight rusty color sheen to it) A light wand that is of medium size and perfect for transfiguration.
Family : Father - Kichul Cho, a muggle who is a muggle engineer. He was quite proud of his two daughters going to Hogwarts, although quite a shock.
Mother - Heasun Cho (Maiden name: Chang), a witch who studied in Beauxbatons in France. Highly interested in fashion she traveled a bit and studied abroad at different countries. Soon, she settled in London and met Danielle's father. Now she's a seamstress at her own wizard clothing store in Diagon Alley. [By suggestion of Skada, now a fancy 'Dress Robes' store 8D]
Older sister - Christina Cho, older than Danielle by two years, she attends Hogwarts as a third year. A strong sibling rivalry is wedged between them, and when Danielle will show up at Hogwarts, they'll do all they can to avoid eachother. ((Haha, this is how it will be when I start HS this year x3))
A Bit About Him/Her : There is a heavy stereotype placed on asians, on how they're immensely intelligent and over-achievers. Danielle, however, is what her friends call a 'failure of an asian'. She's lazy and only wants to have fun, and only puts 80% of her brains (if she has any) to work in school.
However, Danielle excells in getting in to trouble, and even more important out of it. She's sneaky and loves to trick people, but to her friends, she'd do anything to make them happy. Mostly to her sister, she clings to her when shes around her friends and acts like a pest. As her father says, she's just a happy-go-lucky little girl with a slight mean streak. A bit odd as well, always spouting made up words as insults to others, but never feeling any retaliation from their insults and jibes in the beginning. She had endured teasing for a lot of her life before she was brought up in America amongst snarky kids who teased her for being 'Chinese'.
A definite quirk that even her friends are worried about her, is that she thinks Peeves is the best spirit at Hogwarts. Always chasing him down for ideas for tricks, it soon became a regular precaution for Peeves to stay away from her, since Danielle was quite hard to chase off. She's also very violent. In many ways.
At first, she comes off as shy and quiet, but thats not the case when she's around friends. Danielle also believes that she can't make any friends, and doesn't like talking to strangers. She's always bewildered when she finds herself in a tight-knot group of friends. A stain on her normally delightful personality is that Danielle can be very selfish and rude. Of course, she's only human, and these can be quite common. Her selfishness is mostly pertaining to money (It was a bit tight around home before her mother opened her store) and food. She can hold some pretty nasty food grudges. (I.e., if someone tries to take some of her food that she ordered in a restaurant without asking) Danielle is only rude to those she feels deserves it, but can run her tongue off at the wrong person without realizing it. (Which usually ends up with her being grounded by her mother) All in all, Danielle can be very sweet, or a very large pain in the rear.
A Moment By Himself/Herself : "Oh puh-leeeeeeze!" Danielle whined incessantly, clinging to her elder sibling's arm. "She's soooo adorable! And fluffy! You'll absolutely adoooore her!" she continued to croon, almost like an advertisement. "Geroffme!" Christina, Danielle's older sister snapped. A few heads turned in Diagon Alley, wondering what the commotion was about. She flung her arm wildly in all directions, trying to shake off the leech; but Danielle stuck on like glue, still emitting pleads and begs. "Just 3 more sickles and 2 knuts is all I neeeeed!" It seemed that she wanted to purchase something and was a bit short on money. Christina spun so quickly that her little sister slapped into her back. "No!" she shouted, exasperatedly. "You know dad! He's allergic to cat hair! And so am I! So if this isn't a hairless one, forget about it! Besides, I'm not giving you any more loans until you pay me back for those cauldron cakes you wanted earlier!" Finally relenting, Danielle released her grip on her sister's arm and shuffled away, sullenly.
As soon as she turned the corner around the Leaky Cauldron, her face melted from that of defeat to triumph. In her hand was 5 silver sickles, no doubt from her sister's wallet. Danielle smirked happily and stuck out her tongue at Christina's back. Whistling happily, she skipped through the sea of magical folk and made her way over to Magical Menagerie. As she pulled open the door, Danielle was treated to a large assortment of smells and sights. Some she recognized, some foreign. Danielle made her way over to the feline section and spotted the kitten she had her eye on. The 10 year old's eyes widening as the kitty rolled around with an enchanted yarn ball. She always loved cats, and every year was devastated when she couldn't buy a cat for her birthday. This year, however, her father and mother relented, knowing that for most of its life the cat would live at Hogwarts.
"Meow little kitty meow!" she giggled, petting it as much as she could through the metal bars. Danielle sighed, knowing that she had finally found the pet she wanted. The little kitten was all black except for her paws that had white socks on them. Her tail was also dipped in white. Danielle stared at it's piercing yellow eyes, then looked at the sign under the cage. "Female, blk/wht/ylw. 5 sickles" She had a bit of money on her, but decided to use the 5 sickles she stole from her sister. Danielle skipped ecstatically up to the front counter, pointed to the kitten, and dumped 5 silver sickles onto the countertop. Soon, she was out of the store carrying the kitten, now dubbed Shina, in a wicker carrying cage.[
Her text color is black. Yes, plain old black.
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 8:00 pm
I don't see any problem with your mother owning a minor clothing store in Diagon Alley, it is quite a big and magical place. This still has the same problem as the other one. Good writing, good description, good role play too. But still too hard to read. You really need to learn how to break up the text.
If you need any help with it don't afraid to pm me.
Other than that, welcome to Hogwarts . smile
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