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lore of the lunar rose

PostPosted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 10:44 am


love is like a rose nothing is forever,if its not true then it shal wither.when you love true thers no question of who.so befor you say i love you make sure your not short sold.cause trule love will not wither its made of gold.


please be gentle mrgreen
PostPosted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 1:14 pm


Oh dear sir, I am always gentle. 3nodding

Living_Black_Rose


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PostPosted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 11:47 am


cronoce
love is like a rose nothing is forever,if its not true then it shal wither.when you love true thers no question of who.so befor you say i love you make sure your not short sold.cause trule love will not wither its made of gold.


please be gentle mrgreen


Not bad. I like the them in your poem. It nice.  
PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 6:33 pm


like a star in the sky i saw her as anyone elts but as the friendship grew so did her ambition.as the signs came i missed them all to dense to see the person in front of me.to shy to speak she hope for a sign unable to stand it.finaly unable to hide her ambition she asked her question and sat in amazment when i said"yes".love is here heart .

lore of the lunar rose


lore of the lunar rose

PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 1:44 am


the world say no your friends say yes how to choose wich path is best.when you let others controle you nothing can console you.choices come choices go as time chooses how we flow.when you think for yourself things are better so forgert what they said it dosent matter.think.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 6:13 pm


Awesome, truly awesome. Now where do you get your inspiration? I know you write some when you're passed out but what inspires you? Am I potential inspiration? wink

Living_Black_Rose


lore of the lunar rose

PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 11:13 pm


maby wink
PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 11:40 pm


whee YAY! 4laugh

Living_Black_Rose


lore of the lunar rose

PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2007 12:42 am


the world is full of evil big and small some we overlook when we should knotice it all.pain and suffering childeren crying,yet noone is listening.chemical gases filling loungs of little ones while ther parents are shot and robed.but these times do not fall on deff ears as a savior has appeared.the one who helps and saves lives with them i leave my pride.help another dont denie thy brother and noone elts will suffer.hope.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2007 12:56 am


Living_Black_Rose
Awesome, truly awesome. Now where do you get your inspiration? I know you write some when you're passed out but what inspires you? Am I potential inspiration? wink


my dear my insperation is emotion wink

lore of the lunar rose


Living_Black_Rose

PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2007 12:58 pm


Yes, I understand that but if I could be the cause of that emotion, that would be awesome.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 2:05 pm


wasup genius peoples

killercatfluffer208


Living_Black_Rose

PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 11:46 pm


Not much, how about you genious?
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 2:06 am


you read it stare

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