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WeCanLiveLikeJackAndSally
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 Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 6:22 am
The cold wind blows...
Nothing's left...
Nothing shows....
My face is blank...
I Just go with the flow
Deep down she has a small heart
It has a face...It frowns...
I'm filled with hatred and pain...
Not the simple pain...
The unberable pain...
I sit alone in the rain...
Hoping one day it would all change.
If i die....Would it be for the best...?
Laying in my wooden casket...
In an uneternal rest...
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 11:59 am
I like that. It's like a short story which keeps emotion in every line.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:47 am
dats awesome =D
a short ballad perhaps?
^^
love it =3 heart
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 2:18 pm
thank you. i worked hard on that poem.
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WeCanLiveLikeJackAndSally
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Posted: Sun Sep 02, 2007 5:33 pm
i liked it allot it was very pretty
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