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 Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 1:16 am
Hey everyone! I created this thread to post up my characters and get help/constructive crit from everyone. The characters will be posted seperately. In this first post, I'll put up the basic skeletal plotline:
:Original Novel . Sci-Fi/Romance/Action-Adventure . PG-13 or R rating
:Ayixe is one of the highest sought-after Assassin/Bounty Hunters across the Western Galaxy. She and her small crew (of two) abord the ship Love Traitor make their living by tracking down and bringing in the bad guys - whether it be dead or alive. Now a new bounty has been sent out, one that will require travel throughout the Middle and Eastern Galaxys. One that will require the utmost caution as it's the utmost dangerous. One that Ayixe just can't resist. But there's a problem. The bounty she's after isn't everything he seems to be, and Ayixe must decide to either trust an accused serial rapist, or bring the jerkwad in. ...And then there's the fact that a goup of Eastern Galaxy Space Ninjas seem to want her entire crew dead. How can Love ever be possible with a Traitorus jerk and a Complex that isn't getting any easier?
Now onto the characters!
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 1:38 am
Character #1: Ayixe (Eye-ix-aye)
1. Gender: Female
2. Age: 20
3. Height: 5'7.5
4. Weight: 120
5. Hair: Long, straight, dark brown hair. (which she usually wears in a simple ponytail)
6. Eyes: Hazel.
7. Skin: Tanned.
8. Posture: Slouches slightly.
9. Appearance: Thin and fit due to her job description, but rarely wears make-up, and is usually always covered in grime or scraped up because of a chase. Always wears loose pants and some sort of tanktop, bitten nails, slightly freckled face, and has quite a few scars from her job.
10. Neatness: She's cluttery.
11. Health: Pretty healthy, no serious illnesses.
12. Birthmarks: Her birthmark faded long ago.
13. Abnormalities: She curses... a lot.. Other than that, it' very abnormal for a girl to be in just a field.
14. Heredity: Got her softened features from her mom, and her father's eyes and sailor mouth.
15. Class: Middle-lower class
16. Occupation: Assassin/Bounty Hunter.
17. Education: Dropped out of high school her senior year to travel around and help her father - who died that very day on a hunting mission.
18. Home life: Lives on her own now, she moved out when her father died, and hasn't gone back since. Her mother is a nurotic wreck and it drives Ayixe insane. She was an only child, and grew up next door to Rynk, whom she played with most of the time. Now she lives in an appartment across the planet, with her mutt dog, Kitty, although they're rarely there.
19. I.Q: High when it comes to hand-to-hand combat and weaponry, medium when it comes to book smarts, and absolute computer/mechanimal illiterate.
20. Religion: Athiest.
21. Sex Life: No boyfriend, although not a virgin. She lost it when she was eighteen, and then had a few boyfriends after that. Her job, however, makes her sex-life almost non-existant.
22. Ambitions: Wants to be known not only in the Western Galaxy, but in the Middle and Eastern Galaxy as well.
23. Frustrations: Children, things not going her way, and mechanical stuff.
24. Temperament: ...She get's angry REALLY easily, and curses a lot. Fen sets her off a lot, as well.
25. Attitude: Usually a pessamistic, but can be optimistic at times. Sometimes acts wacky and crazy when she's happy.
26. Imagination: More of a realist than anything.
27. Phobias: She's seriously afraid of becoming a bounty herself.
28. Superstitions: Not very sperstitious in the least.
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