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Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 5:54 pm
Name: Lexenos Mukaiden Age: 28 Race: Werewolf (unless the RPG calls for human). He can control when he changes form (unless the GM says otherwise). Sexual Orentation: Gay
Werewolf History: His first change was at the age of two. He was found at the age of four hunting a rabbit in the forest. He was soon taken to an orphanage given a name, and spent the next 14 years of his life moving to different orphanages. He never bothered to ask why he was moved so often because he was only a child and didn't really care why. He does remember his life before he was taken into the orphanage, he just pretends he doesn't know.
Human History: He watched his parents murdered soon after his fourth birthday. He was soon taken to an orphanage, and spent the next 14 years of his life moving to different orphanages. He never bothered to ask why he was moved so often because he was only a child and didn't really care why.
Demeanor: Calm, level-headed, stable, and very mysterious. Most people become instantly curious and ask him many questions, but usually find out little.
Nature: He actually has a pretty short temper, but he manages to control it fairly well. He always acts as a pillar of others to lean on, but is always very lonly because he never allows himself to get close enough to anyone to lean on them.
He does this, as a werewolf, because he's learned from personal experience that anyone who knows his secret will try to hunt him down and kill him. His personal experience is this: when he was 11 years old, he fell in love with another boy at the orphanage. One night, soon after dark, they snuck out, the other boy going out with the promise of seeing "something neat." When they were at the edge of the forest near the orphanage, Lex shifted into his crinos form. The other boy ran screaming into the building. The man in charge soon came running out with a shotgun in his hands, firing like a madman. Lex took off running and didn't stop until sunrise. When the orphanage couldn't find him, they assumed that the beast had gotten him. The other boy had gone mad, and stopped speaking; he could never tell Lex's secret. A few days later, Lex changed his name to Lexenos Mukaiden; he had taken the last name of the boy he had loved. He soon stumbled onto yet another orphanage, and continued his constant movement from orphanage to orphanage.
He does this, as a human, because he was forced to watch his parents die. He distances himself so he won't have to deal with losing any one he is close to. Soon after his fourth birthday, two thugs broke into his house. His mother shoved him into the hidden closet under the stairs and told him to be quiet. The door of the closet was riddled with cracks that he could see through, and he just peered in silence as he watched his parents being shot to death.
Finghting Style: VERY good with guns, but aslo very proficient in street brawls.
It used to be a lot better, but I accidentally erased it T-T Anyway, comments? Suggestions? Anyone? Murr?
Lex
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 7:11 pm
Why hasn't anyone commented yet? Does it suck that bad? ... I FEEL SO UNLOVED!! *sniff* T-T
Anyway, please please PLEASE comment. Please. I'd really like opinions. Even incredibly pessimistic opinions are welcome. Y'know, as long as they're not just to be mean. They have to be honest.
Lex
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 9:13 am
Better than other wolfen characters, but then again, I hate them all the same.
It's a meh, at least. You're very good at writing, I'll give you that, but think about your characters before you write. Take a Mary Sue Litmus paper test. I swear, it'll be the biggest eye opener for your Roleplaying.
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 9:40 am
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 11:10 am
I took the test, and I did incredibly well. I'll post everything in my journal.
Lex
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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 10:39 am
Anyone else care to comment?
Lex
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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 11:11 am
well...i'm not a great character rater...but I guess it's only fair if I'm going to expect other peoples to comment mine... xD
Well I think it's pretty good, just a lot of typical-ish events I think. But I guess everything's typical now cuz we've just about used everything. lol
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 8:47 am
Very true. Hee hee. Thanks. Anyone else?
Lex
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