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 Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 1:22 pm
(zuko) Behind Those Golden Eyes
Zuko is fascination. Zuko has much frustration. Zuko needs more concentration. All behind those golden eyes.
The blue spirit is quick and fast before you know it he'll walk right past. The blue spirit is a prince in disguise. All behind those golden eyes.
Zuko is so un-understanding. Zuko is way too demanding. All behind those golden eyes.
Zuko has too many emotions. Not one bit of devotion. All behind those golden eyes.
Zuko in great depression, so much that he must be stressin'. All behind those golden eyes.
Zuko, so much confusion, doesn't know what he's choosin. All behind those golden eyes.
Zuko's behind those golden eyes. All his emotions, all his memories, everything...All behind those golden eyes.
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 5:05 pm
It was good, refreshing and new, but the only thing that bothers me, is that you say he doesn't have devotion.
In fact he has the most devotion of all in the Avatarverse, in my opinion.
other than that, good stuff ;D
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 11:13 am
Pinumbra It was good, refreshing and new, but the only thing that bothers me, is that you say he doesn't have devotion.
In fact he has the most devotion of all in the Avatarverse, in my opinion.
other than that, good stuff ;D no devoition,yeah I was just making stuff up sweatdrop srry
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 11:03 am
I agree with Pinumbra, but other then that it was very good!
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SevenJanewayLufferBunnies
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 2:34 pm
Yeah, all his emotions hidden. He doesn't show much besides anger.
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Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 2:09 pm
There's another poem,it's called "the scar".I also wrote it in my journal...(it's about zuko again sweatdrop )
I want it to go.(5)
I wish it would dissapear.(7)
But scars just stay there.(5)
She could of healed it.
I could of finally been freed.
Can a scar be healed?
My scar will be on
My face of frowns and saddness.
A mark of failure.
Insecurity.
They look at my scar, not me.
Insecurity.
pain and emotions.
anger and all of my wounds
Is there a difference?
A wrong decision
That I made, a small mistake.
I paid with my face.
A terrible burn
The worst thing in all my life
And changed my life too.
~spoken by Zuko's inner feelings...
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Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 4:17 am
That was so sad and deep.... I liked it alot, though.
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 4:11 pm
RockyRoadSmith That was so sad and deep.... I liked it alot, though. Thx,was even sad for zuko when I was typing this in my journal... cry
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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 4:02 pm
Zuko loves katara behind those golden eyes lol goo jobi liked all the poems heart mrgreen
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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 4:03 pm
i was gonna say the same thing as pinumbra
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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 4:07 pm
i like the quote
They look at my scar, not me.
it reminds me when katara said to zuko
i can can see the enimies face as your but she
wasnt thinking of his scar but her undiening love and hate for him
very deep i can definatly see zuko talking to her that way exspresing his feelings calm and submisive check out my playlist
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Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 5:26 pm
Aww,I almost totally about these poems that I(in my former account) wrote.I think I was thinking of a new poem a few weeks ago(or more).Oh and thx for those who posted 3nodding I hope I write some more poems...
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