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Terrence Urameshi

PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 4:21 pm


DaTrue-SouljaBoy
srry bout da wait had to study yo ryhme
that's something else in this dome, you shouldn't have to look at your opponent's rhymes to write YOUR s**t. That's how cats end up feeding, and that's probably why so many of these cats are scared to go first.

Anyway, this was easily won by Stryker. You both need work, and a lot of it. First of all Souljah, don't ever compliment your opponent unless you can flip it around or make it ill. Your punches did practically no damage. The only good thing about your verse is I see you know how to use a multi, and that's way better than these elementary a** mono, and 2 syllable rhymes alot of cats using these days. Your best rhyme was probably the "burn through rappers chest/survived it twice" bar. But yeah, work on incorporating wordplay and stronger disses, keep the multis up.

vote: Jaiden Stryker
PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 4:22 pm


Jaiden...Punches,structure....Actual relevence.

Syllvurr


Terrence Urameshi

PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 4:35 pm


SilverSpyder
Jaiden...Punches,structure....Actual relevence.
lmao, battle somebody *****. I won't boot you either, but please get active.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 8:07 pm


Quote:
The only good thing about your verse is I see you know how to use a multi, and that's way better than these elementary a** mono, and 2 syllable rhymes alot of cats using these days.


So basically, a "good" battle to you is how many multis you can do along with syllables? That's fine if that's your personal preference to battle, but to dock points from somebody NOT doing that is biased as ********. That's like me trying to tell somebody that they're not too good if they only rhyme ONE time for every line, rather than multiple times like myself. That's my personal style. I have more than one style, but that's obviously my favorite.

Battles should be judged on relevance, ACTUAL rhyming, creative metaphores, originality in style, consistency, and things like that. As somebody that actually freestyles, I rarely hear of anybody who puts the number of syllables, similies, and other s**t used by poets.

Like I said, if that's your personal style, fine. But that biased s**t needs to stop. Not everybody has the same style... Hell, nobody should even WANT the same style unless biting is too hard to not do.

Jaiden Stryker


Terrence Urameshi

PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 8:32 pm


please shut the ******** up. You obviously misconceived what I said. I meant that the only part of his verse that he showed some talent in were his multis. He doesn't understand much of anything else, but he knows how to use multisyllabic rhymes. Did I not say he still ******** lost? He got owned in everything else. The most essential part to any battle verse is punches, which he obviously didn't have. if you want to use that basic a** nursery rhyme s**t, then that's you. I was just giving him props on the one thing he excelled in.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 9:09 pm


Terrence Urameshi
please shut the ******** up. You obviously misconceived what I said. I meant that the only part of his verse that he showed some talent in were his multis. He doesn't understand much of anything else, but he knows how to use multisyllabic rhymes. Did I not say he still ******** lost? He got owned in everything else. The most essential part to any battle verse is punches, which he obviously didn't have. if you want to use that basic a** nursery rhyme s**t, then that's you. I was just giving him props on the one thing he excelled in.


Don't be a ********' idiot. I'm not talking about just this ******** battle. I've been looking at how you(and some others) judged in every battle on this page. I'm not talking about this battle in particular, but since you did it in this battle most RECENTLY, I'm bringing it up in here. You've been doing this s**t for quite a while now. If being a damn poet is the way you want to battle, fine. But don't talk as if that's the way battles should be when that's NOTHING but your personal style.

Jaiden Stryker


Terrence Urameshi

PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 9:15 pm


you're not making any sense at all. you're pissed because I gave him props for using multis, when you had little to none? Plain and simple, 3+ syllable rhymes are better than monosyllabic ones. It takes more finesse to rhyme like that consistently. I'm not saying, all monosyllabic-rhyme punches suck, i'm not saying all multi-syllabic punches are ill, i was just giving him props for something he had that you didn't. So understand that and shut the ******** up, or I'm kicking your wack a** out of here with the rest of the n00bs.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 9:25 pm


Terrence Urameshi
you're not making any sense at all. you're pissed because I gave him props for using multis, when you had little to none? Plain and simple, 3+ syllable rhymes are better than monosyllabic ones. It takes more finesse to rhyme like that consistently. I'm not saying, all monosyllabic-rhyme punches suck, i'm not saying all multi-syllabic punches are ill, i was just giving him props for something he had that you didn't. So understand that and shut the ******** up, or I'm kicking your wack a** out of here with the rest of the n00bs.


Mad because you gave him props? I was the first to give him props in this battle. Why the ******** would I be mad about someone else doing the same? ******** that s**t about syllables in battles. That's a STYLE that's NOT my own. You think I'm trying to switch my style up to look like yours? ******** that. That's the problem here. Too many ******** got the exact same style, so when you battle, it becomes a battle of who is best at that style. But I come with my own style. If I use multiple syllables, fine. But that's not my style. THAT'S what I've been trying to tell your dumb a**.

And you know what? You can kiss my Black a**. You're a little p***y a** internet thug who is ONLY talking s**t right now because you're safe at home. Just a kid acting tough on the internet. Ever wonder WHY it's inactive? I'll let you take a guess on your own. You act like you're the s**t, but you aint nobody but a punk a** child on Gaia. And before you throw the word n00b around, make sure you're using it properly, a*****e. I'm quitting this inactive a** guild. Some of the people here are cool, but it's b***h niggas like you that f** everything up. Honestly, you're nothing but a moderator on a Gaia guild forum, but you're on a high-horse anyway? Pathetic man. Very pathetic. There's a difference between style and skill. Skill is your ability while style is your preferred way of doing something. Because I prefer not to use multis, you think it's because I can't? What kind of elementary school bullshit logic is that? A shame too. If you didn't come off like such as a*****e, I wouldn't have responded to you the way I did. Come correct next time you speak to someone. When you learn what you're talking about, hit me up. Peace out, p***k.

04/23/07 Edit: DJ Price, where the ******** do YOU fit in here? Get the hell off of his nuts and mind your business. If you weren't such a retard, you'd see that I acknowledged what he was trying to do, but disagreed with how he did it. The only reason why I blew up at him is because he came in talking about "shut the ******** up." When disrespected, I disrespect back. I wasn't even addressing you, but YOU came in to diss me too? You can kiss my a** too then. Make sure you fully understand the situation next time, because you wouldn't have came in here talking s**t like you did if you truely understood. Dumb a** dickriding f*****t. Have a nice day. 3nodding

Jaiden Stryker


Terrence Urameshi

PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 9:41 pm


rofl rofl rofl
First off, you're only quitting because you knew you were about to get your wack a** banned. Second, this guild is inactive because all the vets quit from too many wack a** n00bs like you showing up. Third, how the ******** is other people using multis having the same style? That only proves your ignorance. Everyone who has any type of knowlegde of emceeing is aware of multisyllabic rhyming. Multis isn't a ******** "style", it's a skill, that apparently your wack a** didn't have, and you got pissed that you didn't have. cool And where at any point in this conversation did I make a reference to being a "thug"? Battling people like this inexperienced dude were the only type of wins you were going to get around here, as you quickly noticed when Cool Aid ripped your s**t. And don't flatter yourself, because it wouldn't surprise me at all if you show up to this dome everyday as a non-member and just look through battles. So go on back to posting your wack a** verses in the Freeflow Sticky and the Cypher thread, trying to get people to rate your s**t. rofl rofl
PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 9:58 am


AHAHAHAHAHAHA. Jaiden stop being a little b***h about nothing at all. Terrence is trying to explain to you a basic skill that all good emcees have. So stop crying, step your game up. And come back when your n00bish a** has some actual talent.

b***h-a**, useless ********.

DJ Price


+.Reasonable~Doubt.+

PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 8:14 am


~>LMFAO!<~
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