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 Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 3:21 pm
I wouldn't flame this story, trust me. It's good!
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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 8:57 pm
Aww thank you Drago! I assume that means that I should continue it? Darn writer's block! stressed I know how I'm going to end the story and how I'm going to go about completing it...but the process is the problem. crying
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 6:54 pm
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Posted: Thu May 03, 2007 8:28 pm
Ah I feel inspired once again! Too bad it took being in a foreign classroom for 4 hours to do it but here it is. Hehe I haven't been able to type it all up so I just scanned the paper I wrote it on (don't worry my spelling is really good without typing and I don't write sloppily either).
NOTE: I couldn't bridge the two parts together but when I do it'll mainly be the family eating breakfast together. Basically a scene which shows the family's closeness.
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Posted: Thu May 03, 2007 8:30 pm
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Posted: Fri May 04, 2007 4:36 pm
As you can see in the first page I was trying to come up with the names for the mom, dad, sister and so on. I just quickly thought them up though if anyone has a better idea for a name I'll replace that. Oh yeah, the second one looks bigger cause I just took off the unnecessary space on the page.
NOTE: I may have made some errors like punctuation, spelling or leaving out a word or two since I did write this during class and I haven't had time to completely edit it.
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Posted: Sun May 06, 2007 1:00 pm
I honestly believe that you can make a career ou of these stories, at least, if it weren't illegal t use someone elses characters. Still, I am really enjoying these stories. Keep it up!
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Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 6:36 pm
davids_buddy_type_thing I honestly believe that you can make a career ou of these stories, at least, if it weren't illegal t use someone elses characters. Still, I am really enjoying these stories. Keep it up! Awww thanks so much!! That's the nicest compliments I've heard.
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 7:14 pm
No kidding. You need to discuss this with the LOTD creators and ask them if you could write a book.
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 7:55 pm
Lord Drago No kidding. You need to discuss this with the LOTD creators and ask them if you could write a book. Awww thanks! redface Hehe you guys are the only reason I keep on writing this stuff. Thanks again! Hmm perhaps I have found my college major?
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 5:39 pm
Keep it up, and it could be. I've written several stories, one of which has already been copyrighted to my name.
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 5:51 pm
Ooh really? That sounds so cool. I've always loved writing and even when I write stuff that I think is lame everyone usually likes it. I don't know why though. sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 6:41 pm
Same here. Well, actually, no. I will sometimes write about things I do find interesting that no one at all enjoys reading. Skibi, though, no offense, definately has the most fluent writing on Gaia for some strange reason. Maybe it's her sentence structure, her mysterious arrangement, or her extensive vocabulary, but she's my favorite author next to you who writes more and is also online more.
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Posted: Sun May 13, 2007 7:48 pm
Ah I must read these Skibi stories. Hopefully my writing will improve when I go to college and learn more vocabulary and such.
Agh...I'm stuck on what to write next. I have it all on my head I want the mom to go back or something...maybe stay back with her husband then Zieg ans his sister go off into the woods. Then I want the sister to have to fight off a wingly, die in front of Zieg, tell him to run. After that he'll run as far as he can have a clichédrun until he falls unconscious only to be woken up by some strange people, in this case some human revolutionaries who take him to Emperor Diaz. Sound good? I think so...maybe...not sure. Ugh...I have so much trouble with the dialogue . :Shakes fist and curses dialogue:
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