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 Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 2:43 pm
lol, my bad. I ******** up. All the new posts from the other thread show up on the second page. So I'll make a new one and paste verses.
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 2:47 pm
REASONABLE DOUBTS'S VERSE: Damn it's been a minute since I did this...
Yo, i'm bout to reinact Yu Yu Hakusho an' take my spirit gun out an' shoot through Urameshi's soul/ lemme show this cat real lyrics cuz i'm not speakin' of punches when I say ya verses got alotta heavy blows/ you takin' a bold shot thinkin' you can put up a decent challenge, but really you just a warm up so stop/ cuz you ain't gettin' anywhere in this career, as you'd prolly be better off if you literally sold rocks/
TU persevered this challenge against the fadin' odds, unaware that he's the mortal that's facin' God/ the only f*****t who would believe that he could actually spit sin, just from suckin' on satin's c**k/ he thinks he possesses the power to take a blunt object an' actually be able to stab when it's dull/ so i'm shatterin' your hopes of winnin' against me as I take a mallet an' smash in ya skull/
these punches cracks his skull to the point, he'd be addicted to this skill N resort to snort my lines/ cuz that's his only means of elevation, but the potency of it will only further distort his mind/ we all can see his soon to be destruction, but I ain't gotta be his direct resource to die/ cuz TU's infidelity that'll be exposed in this battle will have him wishin' his mom had abort his life/
he's incapable to read - let alone ventilate this, as just breathin' the same air as I do will break ribs/ cuz like gemini's TU needs two face it, that he couldn't be me even if he had the power shape shift/ i'm pass mutilatin' this kid, so now I erase his, bein' until he's left unidentified lika spaceship/ an' before he even had a chance to recuperate wit, his verse lika lyrical cannibal, I jus' ate it/
Already
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 3:00 pm
alright look,
no amount of prep could get you to match my routs on text
my sentences bring death! sorta like court cases, but I don't need a jury to put doubt to rest
I'm facin a b***h though, you couldn't excel in the Art of War if you traced it wit stencils
so this cat's cummin up #2 in this battle like masterbation with pencils
punches done torn ya limbs, left ya corpse a formless in mix in morgues kid!
but still I'm forcin a win outta this race like genocidal extortionists
started out on someone's d**k, its' obvious why I'm defeatin ya raps whore
and like attachin his aorta to my glands, when I spit bars all you'll see is this cat's gore!
I'm so sick my punches got Parkinson's, Urameshi's leavin ya mind shook
you're average at best, so I'm destroyin the marginal like takin flames to ya rhymebook
tryin specific measures against me but I'm amused you'd try at winnin without ya research
you're nowhere near my skill! so I'm leavin room for Doubt like scientific procedures!
no matter how much reason you put behind doubt I'll own ya illest abilities
I'm going easy son, but still the benefit of the doubt isn't a victory!
never state ya lines are dope, hope ya concentrated cuz I'll grind ya to a pulp!
so keep doubtin yaself, cuz no one would have faith in your verses if you rhymed 'em to the pope!
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 3:03 pm
yeah, I apologize for the wait, track meets are a b***h. and If you're not comfortable seeing your verse like that, then make a post that says "checking in" or "reserved" and I'll paste the verse as one of your posts. Oh, and regardless of how this battle turns out, pm me if you're ever up for a rematch. If more cats like you show up I'll rethink leaving this ******** with everyone else.
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 5:46 pm
oh man i dont think i remember how to vote, anyways my vote goes to TU because Doubt (you are fatal right?), the reason i say that is because you write just like him i.e super long lines with weak to no punches at the end, the only ones i liked from you is your whole last bar. I liked TU's play on doubts name though that #2 line is way overused and the first 2 lines are really similar to something youve said before, anyways TU's punches and flow outdid RD's (haha like renegade disciple) so.....
Vote: TU
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 8:26 pm
wow......you still come here too? Guess this place isn't as dead as I thought. But anyway thanks for voting.
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 7:50 pm
^^lol.
I've gotta say, this was a pretty nice battle. You both had your strengths and weaknesses, and you seemed pretty evenly matched. Reasonable Doubt, had some nice punches and vocab. The only thing I really have to complain about is your verse structure. Made things kinda hard to read. As for Urameshi, not exactly what I expected. You didn't go as hard as you probably could've, but the nameplay and punches were still nice. Here comes Kinetics' legendary breakdown:
Punches/Personals: Tie
You both had some wack lines, and some really good lines, so it wasn't really obvious who had the advantage.
Creativity: TU
TU definitely took this with the nameplay, and the thought behind his punchlines. However, you can't really do much with the name 'Terrence Urameshi', so I give Doubt his props for even trying.
Multis: TU
You both had some, but Doubt's were of a much lower level. The majority of his were somewhat simple, 2-3 syllable rhymes, while TU had 5's, 6's, and 7's all over the place.
Flow: TU
Terrence actually a rhyme scheme (word? XD) while Doubt's lines were stretched as hell, and the format you put your bars in made it hard to catch a flow.
Vocab: Doubt
This was dominated by Doubt. Terrence had some too, but he used his for the sake of his multis, while Doubt used them to power his punchlines. A little complexity never hurt anybody, so again I give you your props.
Since I felt that they came equal on the punchline part of it, I had to base my decision on who had the better intangibles. Even though I mentioned it, multis did nothing really to determine who had the better verse. I wasn't that big on flow either. So it all came down to TU's creativity vs. Doubt's vocabulary. Of course, when it comes to a battle verse, having the creativity to incorporate such things as wordplay and nameplay is a much more valuable asset than how many big words you can use. so........
vote: Terrence Urameshi
Good job to both mc's though. I'm sure this would've been a much better battle if you made the verse length longer or took out more time to prepare your verses.
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 3:40 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 7:11 pm
I could've sworn that I voted here.
Terrance was better overall, so my vote goes to him.
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Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 12:34 pm
My best verse? Prolly not.
Could it be better? Maybe ALOT better.
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Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 2:06 pm
lmao, Fatal it's up to you whether you want to accept that vote fam. rofl
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Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 6:58 pm
Yeah, but this'll prolly be the one and only time I accept THAT kinda vote.
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