R!nalda
As to the Inu yasha and vampyre one... I really don't think that's in character at all. It kind of reminds me of something you would write just to please yourself... You know, rewrite Twilight if Bella was you or something. But then, that's probably what it is.
kinda and kinda not... i just see the similarities... not in inu yasha and twilight, but in those things that i pointed out. i also just wonder about the spelling. so i was making bella ask questions that i would ask... but tried to have her ask them like she would... thanks for the criticism!
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