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Okay, my fellow questers, here's yet another place for you to go to get a good critique of your quest thread. Before you do anything though. read de rules:


1) I am NOT going to sugar-coat anything! What I see is what I'm gonna tell, so don't be expecting little ponies and rainbows.
2) I'm only doing 'finished' quests, okay? That means you gotta have (at least, if not more) Your character's bio, history, and method of getting on the island done, as well as at least one idea for the animal.
3) Don't post anymore forms if all the slots are filled, after you see a blank slot, you may post your form.
4) No rushing me. You want a nice, complete, carefully thought out review/ critique of your quest, right?
5) If you want a second critique, you have to wait until all the slots are empty, also, new critiques are first priority, no matter if they're after you.
6) Use the code provided and no reserving spots, I run on a first come first serve policy.
7) Don't post anything non-relevant to to IoDM.




If you have any questions, PM me.

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Slots:

1) [ X_Bleeding Roses_X ]
2) harpies brother #1
3) Orianna Dulcina
4) ~Open~
5) ~Open~

Completed

Ginchael
Mindsend
Chhayawolf

User Name: Ginchael
Mule's Name: Alan Murrow
Link to Quest Thread: The RIGHT Perspective with Alan Murrow
Any area you want me to pay close attention to: THE DETAILS. I'm terrible at that stuff--I always end up contradicting myself somehow.
Anything else you want to add: I got a great critique from Bress before, so if you want to take that into consideration as well I believe it is on page 3ish.

Thanks!

Ginchael's is completed

Hope it's helpful Gin! Go check it out in your quest thread! ^_^

User Name: [ X_Bleeding Roses_X ]
Mule's Name: Bianca Forest
Link to Quest Thread: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=3214761
Any area you want me to pay close attention to: Nope just an overview of it xD
Anything else you want to add: Thank you?

User Name: Orianna Dulcina
Mule's Name: Anna Lee Ramsey
Link to Quest Thread: [Link]
Any area you want me to pay close attention to: History and Reasons for on island.
Anything else you want to add: Thank you. *Bow*

User Name: Xasanik
Mule's Name: Nicky Giovanni
Link to Quest Thread: [Here]
Any area you want me to pay close attention to: Just things in general
Anything else you want to add: I'm pretty close to completion...I just wanted a few final words from a third party. Make sure I'm not missing anything too important.