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 Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2007 12:24 am
I think having copper circuits (shiny) against his silvery hair would actually be cool, but it really depends how clearly visible the circuits are though, if they're only rather thin lines then it might not be a problem. 3nodding EDIT: Having the circuits stand out (shiny shiny) will be interesting in my opinion. It makes him look... special... My description of Ellie makes her kind of, well, normal... sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2007 3:18 am
Brize Oh, goodness! I'll revamp that Atomic Clock description right away. Thank you for pointing that out. :3 I haven't posted in your quest thread, because I don't want to interrupt the RP that you seem to have going, but I think I like the volcano girl better than the storm boy. She has less info up, but just from the sketches you've posted of her, she seems to have a fun and clearly-defined personality. A crabby little girl with firepower to back it up sounds like she'd be interesting to write scenes with! lol, it'll be okay! it's just a little test RP, to get Ardia down better. heart
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Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2007 7:29 pm
Zvonimir Stojkovic I think having copper circuits (shiny) against his silvery hair would actually be cool, but it really depends how clearly visible the circuits are though, if they're only rather thin lines then it might not be a problem. 3nodding EDIT: Having the circuits stand out (shiny shiny) will be interesting in my opinion. It makes him look... special... My description of Ellie makes her kind of, well, normal... sweatdrop Shiny! Oooh, I like that. Perhaps I should just describe them as shiny. Then if I somehow ever luck into a spirit, I can let Canta decide exactly how shiny to make things. She's the artist! :3 Ellie's appearance is largely inspired (heh) by candles, right? You could always do more with the flame motif. Or, you could have a beeswax theme going on - hexagons, maybe bee-style wings, etc. I think Ellie's powers sound like they'd make for really neat RP, appearance aside, and that's what's important, yeah?
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 7:32 pm
Brize, I have to say, I love your concept. Besides the fact that having the spirit of an Atomic clock is really inventive and awesome, the idea of said spirit being the result of the hopes and dreams of so many people seems so excellent and fitting.
Especially since he's a geeky, spazzy, dork and, honestly, I think that if you took all the dreams of those physicists and engineers and made it human I think that's precisely what you'd get xD heart
Also, I agree with Zvonimir. Keep the circuit marks! They sound so fitting, whatever color they turn out to be x3
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 8:48 am
Thanks Chao, heart . I'm so glad you like the concept! I started out with a personality I thought would be fun to play and then worked backwards to try and find a decent theme to go with it, so I'm pleased it ended up matching in the end. :3
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 1:30 pm
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 5:14 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 7:07 pm
I wonder if I should change Isidor into a girl. It might be less stereotypical.
I could name her Dora?
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 7:12 pm
I like Isidor as a guy, I think it suits him.
Gosh, your spirit-concept is so cute (even though he's a tad nerdy, but that just adds on to the cuteness), I her were real I would probably squeeze the heck out of him. He would be a great helper around the house too, seeing as he likes things nice and neat.
No critique here. ^^
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Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 3:22 am
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