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Reese_Roper

PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 4:25 pm


Introduction (1/100)

To begin can be so hard. You must decide: do I start happily? suspenceful? sadly? You may even decide to omit an introduction and just plunge into the meat of the book.

You ask yourself, "If I say this, will it give the reader too much information I do not wish to have?" "What if I say the wrong thing, and they stop reading before the beginning is over?" "How do I draw them in?"

With all this muddle of worry resting on the beginning, you wonder why you should have one. Some stories would be better without one. Of course, you then how no clue what's going on, making the intro of a story the most pivotal part.

You can get rid of the ending --cliff hangers are all the rage. You can even get rid of the middle --if they don't know what's supposed to be there, they won't miss it. But the beginning... the beginning sets the mood, introduces the key facts you have to know. To exlude the introduction of the story... that is to take away the foundation of the writing.


All this pressure. So much drama. You can get so wrapped up in deciding how to start that sometimes, you can end up not even writing at all.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 5:49 pm


The begining isn't hard for me. Its the middle and the ending that I have trouble with.

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KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 6:09 pm


*Luffs intro*
PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2007 12:32 pm


Love (2/100)

Love?
Exist?
I wish.
'Cause then
I could
Find what
I've long
Dreamed of.

A touch
That goes
Deep down
Into
My heart.

A knowing
That it will
Be there long
After you're
Gone.

Reese_Roper


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2007 1:03 pm


heart
PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2007 2:49 pm


Reese_Roper
Love (2/100)

Love?
Exist?
I wish.
'Cause then
I could
Find what
I've long
Dreamed of.

A touch
That goes
Deep down
Into
My heart.

A knowing
That it will
Be there long
After you're
Gone.


reese that had a lovely affect.

It just flowed out so nicely ^_^ bravo. Very pretty.

Some how it feels like theres another verse after the last one though. -shrugs- Maybe its cause the style makes it feel like it should just keep going.

NovaKing

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