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Zenia_Loves2_Rp Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 5:22 pm
Here is the place where you can write a chapter or two (however many chapters) of your fan fic stories! Now there is one rule for this
Only constructive crtisium like "You really could of changed paragraph five" not "This story bites!" something the author can go on to fix alright?
Where trying to help people discover their writing talents not cut them down! So Have fun fellow Authors!
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 4:19 pm
Technically this isn't fanfic, but it's the beginning story of a game I'm gonna make some day.
Long ago, in a dimension outside of ours, there were two guardians. The Guardian of Light and The Guardian of Dark. In the dimension, many abused the powers of darkness because they found it easy to obtain. There were those who went through trials to obtain the power of light, and used it to defeat those who abused the darkness. Then one day, the task of being Guardian of Light fell upon Negative Zero, a young man who was obsessed with power. He wanted to use the power of light to rule the universe.
In the meantime, the new Guardian of Dark, the Black Knight (who was also a young man), intended to use the powers of darkness to make peace throughout the universe. When the Black Knight learned of Negative Zero's plans, he immediately set out to defeat him. Unfortunately, Negative Zero had become very powerful and used his powers to kill the Black Knight. His body gone and his spirit determined, the Black Knight went to another dimension, to find a hero who could save the universe...
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Ace The Black Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 3:56 pm
This is a story who lost his family, dreams, friends, memories, and anything that ever ment anything to him after his village was destroyed by the sound village. Ti Finix is a young man that is on a journy to get reveng, but Ti is no ordinary boy ever sense he was born he had powers beyond belief. Sadly his mother died giving birth to Ti and his father died ten years after he was born when the sound village attacked his village and all he has to remember his home by is his mom's scarf and his fathers watch.Check the Role Playing Charecter Spotlight for more detials on Ti Finix
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 3:23 pm
I've decided that I'm going to restart the story that I had been doing in my journal. I didn't exactly like the way it was going and on top of that I've neglected the story for weeks. It would be best to start from the beginning, so I'm going to do that. I'll also be altering the story from what I had originally. And for those who know of my two RP characters, I'm going to have them work as partners at some point. I hope the story turns out better this time 3nodding
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Ace The Black Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 6:53 pm
Well this new fic is based off of Maximum Ride (By James Patterson).
For thoose of you who haven't read it in awhile.
Charcters.
Max, Fang, Iggy, Angel, Gasman and Nudge.
I guess there should be a title. short description It focuses on something that happens to Max.
Clipped Wing
Rising into the air always feels like bliss. You feel your skin tingle, your hair whipping around you madly, you feel the andereline pumping and yet you feel perfectly calm. Well the higher I rose the more I realized the wind was getting stronger and colder. Soon I was having a hard time trying to fly. I tried to bank but the current under me wouldn't let me. No one told me there was high wind today.
Great now I'm stuck here the wind is so strong my eyes are watering I can't see all that well. Damn how high up am I? Well I can't possible be that high up. I mean I can't hear that well but I don't hear anything. I swear when I go back I'm going to kill Fang. Then again when is that not on my to do list? Well I could begin to make out a plane. Then I realized I'm going to hit it. I couldn't move barley finally i inched away from the plane but my wing hit the plane, hard. The instant it touched I felt the bone break. Then I lost all control and was sent plumeting to the ground.
I hit it full force and blacked out.
~Fang's view~
Where's Max? I asked myself after the first hour after she left. It doesn't take that long to grab some Mountain Dew from Wall-mart. I grabed my jacket.
"Hey Guys I'm gonna see what's taking her so long be back in a few minutes."
"Alright."Everyone said. Well the wind was getting stronger and stronger I decided against flying. I ran. Then i started to actually get concerned. "Wouldn't she call me if there was a problem?" I began running faster and faster until I hit top speed. I was into the woods when I found her. I knew seeing her lying on the ground nothing good had happened. It was offical when I saw her scared and bleeding I checked her wings they were both broken.......badly. First I called the guys to high tail it over here. Then I called Dr. Martinez Aka her mom.
"Hello?"
"Dr. Martinez....."
"Oh Hello Fang. Something wrong?"
"Yes Max I just found her and I think her wings are broken." I heard a gasp on the other line. "Can you send like paramedics or something?"
"I'll be right there. Where are you at Fang?"
"I'm in the woods near Parson Drive."
"Alright I'll be right there....." I waited for the group and her mom. One thought I had was. Fang this is entrily your fault you didn't tell her the winds were strong todaythe other was I think she's in a coma. I saw Angel and Gasman running full speed towards me. Followed by Iggy and Nudge. Everyone gasped.
"What what's going on guys?" Iggy asked.
"Well Fang what is going on?"
"Well I was going towards Wall-Mart beacuse she was going to get some Mountain Dew so I ran down the path we normally fly and I found her lying here. I checked her wings their busted up pretty good. Then I called Dr. Martinez. She should be here soon." Then I saw the headlights. She pulled over next to us. Then loaded Max into the van. We climbed in. When we reached the hospital Dr. Martinez ordered us to stay in the waiting room. We didn't see her come out for hours.
"Well they are definatly broken worse then I've ever seen. Most bird when their wings are injuried that badly....... They don't ever fly again."
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