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-Gabriel-

PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 2:32 pm


(( Hmm.. ! You have some interesting ideas. I think the inverted rainbow would tend to be the easiest to go after since there is already something like Eternal Darkness -- Living Shadow, and that is the essence of Vyn.

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Every single shadow needs a caster only can it exist. But what about a shadow that exists merely on it's own? Without anyone or anything to cast it, can move on it's own, and can be materialized and caught in a vial!! Does this little shadow really have a life and conscious of it's own?? It is merely a shadow after all...


Both souls are actually interesting that you mentioned. The only thing is that it would be a shame because the essence is what 'colors' your raevan.. so your raevan will most likely be without color in a lot of spots. I can't wait to see what else you come up with. ))


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PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 10:08 am


((*blush* Thanks -Gabriel-! I appreciate your critique! *bows* I'm not worthy! X3

On the Eternal Darkness: I wanted something dark, but tried to stray away from the shadow. The Darkness doesn't move or otherwise have a life of it's own; it's more like the night sky on a starless night. The type of blackness that, after so long of looking at it, may start to make a person feel like they're losing their mind or being crushed. The type that's almost touchable, because it's got so much presence.

On the Inverted Rainbow: I would LOVE the essence to be used in that fashion, where the color is lost. That's why I preferred the hair to be white, and maybe the eyes to be without color as well...full white eyes with mere black pupils for slits, or the ilk. Maybe reversed, since it's inverted, so black sclera with white pupils...as long as that's not treading on the lovely Nue! ^.^;;

I think Malakai is the one I'm most excited about. I would love to bring Kai to life, and see how Kai deals with what s/he is. :3

The essence I'm trying to think of for my Unnamed female will be something earth-toned. I'm trying to figure something out with trees, maybe, something to harmonize the soul. I know it's strange to have the soul without an essence, but I HAD an idea and I forgot it, and that's all I remembered. >.>; Strange, I know.

But, thanks again! : D I really appreciate your words!))

Chrystali
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[kaleido]

PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 12:34 am


Hey chickie! Personally, I love the Queztzal concept. One of my previous unused concept was a Quetzalcoatl Soul because of the mixture of Snake & Bird, and Aztec tribal stuff.

Thank you for your willingness to rethink your rainbow concept as well. I didn't know if you had read my concept thread or not when you first made yours. heart
PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 6:53 pm


Niiice looking concepts you got here~ can I make a suggestion for Malakai?

Instead of an "inverted rainbow", what about some sort of substance that drains all color from its surroundings? There's a lot of ways you can go with something like that.

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 8:29 am


I really like the concept's you have here, they're all very different and unique from the one's I've seen.
I like how you've used old, religious or divine titles for their names and how much detail you've put in the descriptions of them.
Well done. heart
PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 6:49 pm


Oh my, I'm sooooo behind on answering! D:

[kaleido]
Hey chickie! Personally, I love the Queztzal concept. One of my previous unused concept was a Quetzalcoatl Soul because of the mixture of Snake & Bird, and Aztec tribal stuff.

Thank you for your willingness to rethink your rainbow concept as well. I didn't know if you had read my concept thread or not when you first made yours. heart


I wanted to keep it to something I knew about. That way, I could create different situations and reactions that are based on the mythos rather than trying to pull something out of my posterior. X3 I think Hui would have been gorgeous! And I'm so, so sorry, I had not previously seen your thread. Well, correction: I saw it long before I decided to quest for one of my own, and I did not remember it. I do apologize. I can't wait to see yours! :3


Mouse Pachinkorelli
Niiice looking concepts you got here~ can I make a suggestion for Malakai?

Instead of an "inverted rainbow", what about some sort of substance that drains all color from its surroundings? There's a lot of ways you can go with something like that.


Oooh, now there's a good idea! Like...like Acidic Rain or...Space Vacuum? *shot* That's an awesome idea, I'll think on it some more. Thanks Mouse! biggrin And if I find something, I shall so credit your awesomeness! <33


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I really like the concept's you have here, they're all very different and unique from the one's I've seen.
I like how you've used old, religious or divine titles for their names and how much detail you've put in the descriptions of them.
Well done. heart


*bows* Thank you so much. I like to pay homage to the mystic and surreal, with a healthy mix of the two in my characters. I think there's a lot of growth to be had in things that have a past or have one that is at least eluded too. Maybe I over do it, but I really appreciate the compliments. heart

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 8:25 pm


Hi! I like your concepts, and Strangely, Ally is my fav! There are some Fel Essence ideas that you mention later on in the first page, but haven't used yet! Don't forget the Fel Essance is not just something captured that shouldn't be captured, it's also something that shouldn't exist... so for example, Earthquake can become Unending Earthquake. And my personal fav idea you inspired: A mis of Inverted Rainbow and Eclipse, that makes an Inverted Eclipse! o.O Where the middle is hella bright but the radiant ring of glow around it is actually Darkness instead...

Well, that's all I got. smile Interesting concepts!
PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2007 5:39 pm


Ee, thanks for stopping by, Aphismet! redface

I tried to keep the idea of that which exists that shouldn't, but now that you mention it, it DOES seem like those essences listed are strictly things that shouldn't be bottled. O: Thank you for pointing that out, I will certainly take that into consideration!

I LOVE the Inverted Eclipse idea! That would work so well with Malakai, meshing with his color blindness and generally disarrayed attitude. I would like to use it for him (with credits to you) if that's okay!

I'm glad you like Ally. She was the most difficult for me to put forth, I think, because she does border a lot on mythos and the ideas from it rather than something concrete and tangible. Which reminds me, I have a sketch to put up of her. XD

Thanks so much for the feedback! I must get to making this thread official! D:<

Chrystali
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Revanica

PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 4:42 am


Lookin' good with your ideas! I am torn between the Quezt and the Emeraldback Lion concepts. They're really cool. heart
PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 2:46 pm


*needs to stop being a tard and finish this thread* X_X

Thank you, Revanica! While the more mythological aspects are readily apparent, some of them I tried to keep more base and simple. Sometimes that can be more fantastic than fantasy. I've also been trying to keep souls in mind that my OC would realistically come across or otherwise capture, be it on purpose or accident.

Thanks so much for the feedback! X3

Chrystali
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