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PostPosted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 2:22 pm


Okay this isn't exactly a poem.. well I think it is but Im not sure, anyway, please tell me what you think


The protection you give without saying a word
I feel as though nothing can hurt me
the world doesn’t exist, nothing can be heard
Except the feelings within my heart
I lay in your arms
The world stops
The warmth and the love
Flows out of your hands and straight into my heart
My soul soars to the heavens
I don’t know if you feel the same as me
I look in your eyes and I’m sure you do
But doubts fill my mind
How could anyone feel as I do?
To feel weakness in the knees just when I see your face
To feel the butterflies when you smile at me
The have the smile on my face when you call my name
It all means one thing hunny
I don’t know if you know what it is
I know I do
I haven’t felt like this for anyone before
You are the only one and I’m going to make sure it stays that way
I m not leaving you for anything
For if I lost you I would become lost myself
I can’t survive without you
If you disappeared I would lose half of myself
We are made for each other
You know It and I know it
Now we just have to make the rest of the world realise it
PostPosted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 12:15 am


Yes it can be considered a poem it is free style. By the way good job. If you want some examples of poems centered around rhyme scheme scheck out my forum.

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 3:42 pm


Thanks for the help smile
PostPosted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 8:33 am


You are quite welcome.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 8:22 am


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PostPosted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 7:18 pm


Love it!

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