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 Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 11:55 pm
Thats a pretty good Fanfic, even though, yes, she is a bit Mary-Sueish..
@Suki - I took that test on one of my fanfics, and got 7.. o_________o
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 5:45 pm
Well good. Then people can't crit your fanfic as being too Mary Sue-ish.
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fine engineering Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 7:19 pm
Okay, after reading the discription of a Mary-Sue and looking back at your story I realised she is a bit Mary-Sue-ish. Maybe if she had some more conflict it would be better? Anyways it was pretty okay, but not really developed yet.
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