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Yeah. Woo. Combination of a great song and Alice in Wonderland.

Jefferson Airplane (though I could have sworn it was Pink Floyd but it's still a great song.)

I am sorry about the link, though I was being soooooo very smart. That usually ends badly. ^_^

Actually the babel fish was cheating on my part.

I don't like the idea of the TARDIS doing all the translating, it doesn't really make sense in my head...though why a fish does make sense...eh...

I dunno, I loved HItchhikers, and that's actually how I found Doctor Who, Douglas Adams worked on the scrips for the show for like ten years or so.

As to being rushed, I do see what you mean when I re-read it now...I might end up trying to fix that a bit, though to a point I wanted to convey how bustling and busy Draxon was...maybe I didn't really do that as well as I'd hoped.

Perhaps you should've just gone with the TARDIS translating. After all, it does, so you're sort of stuck going with it. Plus, it has the advantage of not flagrantly failing to explain why everything is written in English.

But otherwise I loved the story. Actually, your character reminds me of my RP character. Except she's a doctor who deals with living people... which is to say, on a regular basis. Not just in exceptional circumstances! xd And her personality isn't as appealing as Rosalind's...

EDIT: AAAAUGH! I'm sorry! That was sort of really necroposting, wasn't it? I never look at dates. When I read those sorts of books written in the form of journals I don't even look at dates...